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After the events of “To Where and Back Again,” Fluttershy starts feeling bad for Queen Chrysalis, who is all alone with no other changelings and no love to satiate her hunger. So the pegasus finds Chrysalis in the Everfree Forest and offers to take care of her in the Sanctuary. Chrysalis reluctantly agrees, and finds that even though she doesn’t feel any love from Fluttershy, she feels fulfilled in other ways. The changeling queen goes through some inexplicable changes as she gets used to her new life, and wonders if it’s possible for her to love somepony else.

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This is so damn sweeeeeeeet!!!!

Short but sweet. The transition felt pretty natural.

Absloutely love this, would be cool to see a sequel cause this is super cute.

This site really needs more fics where Chrysalis interacts in a more casual way with the rest of the cast, not just deep thought-provoking scenes or action-packed antagonistic confrontations.

Love this story. One thing to point out:

The changeling queen approached the mare, and put her hoof on Fluttershy’s arm.

hoof.

11786655
I disagree.

Nice fic, anyway. :twilightsmile:

That was soooo adorable~! I wish there was a sequel, I want to see them grow

guess fluttershy just got a thing for villains

I need a sequel to this. Cliffhangers like this always hurt and leave me wanting more. I loved every second of this.

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The arm is above the hoof. At least, I call front legs in animals “arms” lol

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It's not even a cliffhanger, really. It's just... where the story ends. There's no more conflict, and creating a new conflict for the sake of continuing would feel forced. Sometimes, it's best that a story ends right where it does.

11787050
The conflict for a story doesn't have to be major. It could be something relatively minor. Like getting Angel Bunny to like Chrysalis more. But even something major could be dealing with the other Princesses or even Fluttershy's parents or Discord being jealous.

"when I rule the world, I'll have...snakes"

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And Jane Austen novellllllllssss 🎶

Not gonna lie. When I read the authors note and it said AVPM, I somehow thought that meant Alien v Predator so I was real confuse for a bit reading this. Good little read though.

11787050
Agreed. An epilogue of their talk would be nice, but as a short story, this ties everything up in a nice, neat bow.
A trend i've noticed on fimfic is that after stories end, they tend to have a long long drawn out period where all the loose ends get tied up and a few completely unnecessary sequels because the author and the audience can't give up on a character

Sweet Celestia that was adorable. My heart feels like it grew three sizes reading it. :rainbowkiss:

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That would have made for an awesome Chrissy fic

Unusual but well written.
I haven't even noticed any spelling or grammar mistakes.
Not bad. Have a like and Favourite.

This made me cry SO MUCH and really spoke to me as an ex gifted kid

Comment posted by LuZeRpony deleted April 18th

Came from ao3 like not even 5 seconds ago (I'm user_is_socially_awkward_sorry) honestly was not expecting you to be here still love this fuckin story and will be revisiting ALOT your's was the first i read that inspired this weird ship that kinda works that and a meme I watched a while back where the mane 6 use flutters as a first defense with bad guys cause she has like a sorta gift for that until they can stop 'em lol:rainbowlaugh:

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OMG, I've seen the meme you're talking about. Honestly, I'd absolutely believe that the element of Kindness would have that kind of inexplicable power and it somehow turns into the villains all falling for her lolololol !!!! I'm so glad that my silly little fic about Chrysashy cottagecore managed to convince people to ship these two :twilightblush:

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Lmaoo ok I'm glad someone else knows what I'm talking about but yeah I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work I usually don't stray from my otps hell I even have multiple organized list for them that's not to say I don't read other ships i do just not as much as my otps but I decided to give this a shot and I'm glad I did I really enjoyed this and that's not something I say too often especially if it's my first time reading about it now I'm starting to wish there were more stories about these two keep up the good work!

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Aaaaaaaaa that’s so sweet of you to sayyyyyy :333333 thank you so much you’re so sweet 🫶🫶🫶

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No problem I try to be lol especially online spreading undeserved hate is for losers :rainbowlaugh:

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