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Comeonideodic


I (sometimes) write Twidash stories

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Being distracted every once in a while never hurt anyone, an innocent trick a mind can pull to lull you into an alternate reality. However, perpetual forgetfulness can quickly become an overcasting issue, especially during what was supposed to be a fun outing turned somber due to a subconscious that keeps trying to seemingly destroy everything.

Though, even on our darkest nights, serendipity can still have a part to play in this mindless game we call life. A bright, flickering light to guide us on our absent-minded journey of finding love.

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Comments ( 7 )

Man, I needed this. I alway love finding these TwiDash stories here, and then I find an extremely good one just published? Perfect. Loved every second of it, and it kept me smiling throughout the whole thing. :twilightsmile: :rainbowkiss:

Wonderfully written. It was cute, and powerful.
Plus, I love me some good TwiDash writing. Especially the ones that break past the arrogant, one dimensional Rainbow Dash. I feel a story from mostly Dash's perspective would have had that opposite, confused outlook, too, just by how she was described.

While zoned out, did Twilight miss Rainbow's own observing eyes?
That is the type of question that is fun to entertain, and this little (totally not little lol) one-shot definitely made me ask that.

My incoherent analogies aside, it was great!

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I appreciate your kind words, more than one might realize. I'm glad my mindless rambles shoved into story form managed to bring you some joy!

Great story, always happy to find more TwiDash stories, especially if it's as well written as this one. Loved the build-up with both of them slowly opening up to each other in a way that doesn't seem rushed, but not dragged out too long either.

All in all great job :rainbowdetermined2::heart::twilightsmile:.

Thank you for the Twidash!

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Always happy to supply the best ship with more cargo.

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Thanks, truly glad you enjoyed it!

I can relate to Twilight here. The thought of Twidash often draws me into a distracted reverie as well.

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