Just because somepony is ladylike doesn't make her weak. In fact, by using her wits, a seemingly defenseless pony can be the one who outsmarts and outshines them all.
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Adults were weird. That’s Flurry’s conclusion after three years of watching her Uncle Sunburst and Auntie Starlight stutter and blush around each other. It’s obvious that they liked each other, and Auntie Applejack always said that you should be honest. So why can’t those two be honest about their feelings? Well, Flurry’s sick of it. She’s gonna have to do something about Sunburst and Starlight’s little situation. Her mommy would be proud.
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I still say Sunburst and Moondancer are destined for eachother, but I will watch this with interest.
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Thanks! While I love the Starburst ship, I can’t deny that Sunburst and Moondancer would make a nice pair.
Nice story! :) Welcome to Fimfic, Brony/Pegasister!
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Thank you!
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no problem!
new ones
Hands?
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Thank you for pointing out my mistakes! This is why I need to proof read my work... Fixing it right away!
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Happy to help out!
Found some typos.
You spread the italic tag over a couple lines so it doesn’t work. Also I think you missed the closing tag for it.
Missed the ‘n’ to make that ‘even’.
I see you’re more of a coffee fan than a ‘t’ enjoyer.
I’m gonna pretend season 9 didn’t happen. Twilight being the ruler of Equestria doesn’t really work for the story, or else she wouldn’t be in Ponyville.
Okay once again season 9 wasn't that bad I don't understand why people got so upset with that but I can see why but it's not that horribly bad and that's the case of how you go for it I'm going to have to treat this as an alternate universe story but that's not going to dictate my thoughts on the story so let's see how this gose
Oh come on Starlight we all know the reasons 😉
Oh yeah another shipping fuel of Twilight and Flash heck yeah
Mentor
She's a smart kid
Okay this is an interesting one here so it looks like years past and flurry heart Cadence and sunburst arrived to Ponyville to visit Twilight and starlight which that's pretty cool and it looks like flurry heart starting noticing something going on with Starlight and sunburst so it looks like she's going to come up with some ideas I wonder what it would be
Oh no not again the Cutie Mark Crusaders try that and it was a disaster 😱
Ok wow so flurry heart trying to come up with the plan to give Starlight and Sunburst a bust but love potion is out of the question but I'm sure they have other plans and starlight is teaching flurry heart some spells but Sunburst there is a deep thought about it Starlight I'm thinking that he's not good enough for her but his thought is out when they have to get some lunch and it looks like flurry heart is going to ask Pinkie Pie
Tricky little one lol 😆
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That she is!😉 Flurry learnt from the best!
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It’s not that I hate season nine, it’s just that if Twilight became the ruler of Equestria, it’s gonna make this story and its sequels much harder to write since she won’t be around Ponyville or her friends all the time.
Flurry had enough of their "can i or not"!
Nice! Good work, sweet lil fic :3
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Thanks!
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Indeed she has!😉
Well that could have gone better so the ponies or just having some lunch and flurry heart try to be a little bit sneaky to order some spaghetti just like in the movie but unfortunately it did not work then after that they went to Pinkie Pie's sugar cube corner and or some desserts and flurry heart as Pinkie Pie for some help but once again didn't work again but it looks like Starlight having some doubts about sunburst thinking that you'll never love her after what just happened but I'm sure it's not the case
Aww it's always nice to read a little fairy tale especially for the young one and it's very clever of flurry heart to ask them to read off each other both Starlight and sunburst and I got to say it did worked a little bit but they still haven't really confessed yet but sooner or later they will
Flour fight
Lol this is a cute and funny chapter so it looks like sunburst Starlight and flurry heart are baking some cupcake and everything although it kind of escalated quickly and they had a little fun with the flours lol
Downright adorable story. Yeah, I'm rather fond of the Starlight/Sunburst ship myself. Probably one of my favorite straight ships in the entire franchise - along with Flurry/Pound and the assorted officially canon straight ships (as for Spike, I'm evenly divided between Ember and Gabby, but for Ember, I'm evenly divided between Spike and Thorax). And, yeah, I can completely understand about generally ignoring Season 9 (well, aside from a minor AU version that has THE REAL Grogar teaming up several of the Mane 6's greatest enemies [the writers seriously dropped the ball on that "Discord in disguise" nonsense], but even that would be sans Celestia and Luna retiring).
But, anyway, the dialogue, characterizations and general wrap-up were well done and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story!
You got to understand kid sometimes relationship can be a little difficult for either both sides to admit it but I'm sure sooner or later they will say it
Well that escalated really quickly so flurry heart an idea to give them a little boost and she use a mistletoe even though it's not Hearts warming eve and the two of them notice it but Starlight just got rid of it and they just started to reading a book and apparently flurry heart just take a risk and just basically go for the Force she use her bubble to trap Starlight and sunburst something to tell me this is not really her good idea
Like mother like daughter lol
Aww that was a really cute story so flurry heart still trapped up inside the bubble both of them were pretty shock about this why is she doing this then she admitted that she tried to get them to admitted how much they really love each other and despite that odd tactic for the little one it both Sunburst and starlight admitted to each other how much they really care for each other they even share a kiss which that's pretty nice and she let them out and apologize for everything what she pulled and just in time Cadence and Twilight came home and apparently they knew what was going on and betting on them wow but again this was really nice I like it keep out the good work