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Twilight's been locked inside of her castle for days now. Rarity gets called to the castle to investigate, and instead of helping Twilight, she only exhasterbates the problem.
This is a dump of unfinished stories of mine for the sake of just getting them out there. If you'd like to finish any of my stories, be my guest. Credit me, or don't credit me. I don't mind.
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I had a similar idea once. Except the filly in question had a condition that made her have eternal youth (but not be an alicorn). Her body was eternally frozen at the same age the CMC are. But her mind continued to age.
Princess Celestia gave her a necklace that gave the illusion she was an adult, letting her live a life she would never have...
And that's as far as I got. Never got past the rough idea in my head stage.
... That ending ruins everything. No I'm not sorry.
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It doesn't feel needed and added nothing to the story. Everyone swearing off using the spell again is fine. But I don't see the point of adding G5 into it.
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i've been thinking about this comment since the day i uploaded the chapter, and over half a year later, it's still bothering me.
Why even write out that comment? What are you possibly adding by telling me that I ruined this shitty story that was never meant to be taken seriously? Did adding G5 inconsequentially to the end of the chapter, that isn't going to effect anything else in the entire story really that big of a deal? Big enough to leave a comment? A comment that has been getting under my skin for the past year? Were you reading the aftermath of each story and genuinely thinking I was going to have some grandiose message at the end of it? I don't understand people who leave comments that only make people feel bad. "No I'm not sorry?" Really?