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the star bringer

Every star that can been seen in the night sky is brought there by me. so enjoy the night as much as the day.

the star bringer Joined 2nd Nov, 2022 · Offline

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PhoenixFeather
PhoenixFeather #1 · Jul 26th, 2023 · · ·
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Unlike his fellow ponies, StarGazer had no wings to soar through the sky.

Summoning all the courage he could muster, he took to the skies and flew towards Ponyville,

These two lines seem to contradict each other. Other than that, I think this was a pretty good short story, and it gives a little more insight to StarGazer in the process. Whether this is canonical to the other stories, I couldn't rightly say, but it's a welcome addition to his narrative.

the star bringer
the star bringer #2 · Sep 7th, 2023 · · ·
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Thanks for the feed back! P.s I've fixed the story error now

starship55
starship55 #3 · February 12th · · ·
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A GOOD STORY....OF HOPE !!!!!!!

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