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gapty


Hi. It's gapty. Read a fic today. Or don't. They're both the same to me. Just don't tell knighty I said that.

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Sunset's father picks her up from school and drives her to Crystal Peak for a mountain hike. However, she senses that there is more to the spontaneous outing than simply enjoying the trek.


Written in honour for today's Father's Day :twilightsmile:

Huge thanks to PseudoBob Delightus for prereading this fic!

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The concept of the human Sunset letting the Equestrian Sunset live her life undisturbed, and even admiring her in certain aspects, is a concept I wish was used more.

Great story!

This is very interesting.

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I like that idea
She knows she isnt from this world but says "you do you sunset"

How interesting that the human Sunset, just like the Equestrian one before, manipulates and blackmails others out of jealousy. I love how you showed this parallel.

Great concept, and great story! There's a lot here I love. It's rare to see someone explore what either Sunset's family might be like. It's nice to see Sunset get support from the people that raised her. I really like the idea of one character's virtues kicking off some serious self-reflection in their other. Having human Sunset discover pony Sunset through Rainboom fame was a nice touch.

Thanks for writing!

It's interesting how she leads/now did lead a similar life that pony Shimmer chose on arrival. Something about doppelganger always lines up. Her guilt and prolonged silence felt genuine. May she find the friends she needs to get through the hard times ahead.

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