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Adventure is a strong motivator, almost as strong as money, truer words were never spoken for privateer procurer of ancient magical artefacts, Blazing Comet. Living for money and adventure and nothing else. That is until he finds something that he can’t bring himself to sell, and meets a pony that might just show him that there is more to life than buried treasure.
What would you choose; Money, Adventure, or Love?
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Nice. Waiting for new updates
Lovely. A little fast paced, but lovely nonetheless.
I think you meant “without”
Every mare likes Blaze it seems. Wonder what his next mission will be from the crazy mare?
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Thanks for pointing that out, borderline dyslexic so easy for me to miss that stuff
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I’m writing this on my phone and wasn’t paying attention
I accidentally hit publish while in the middle of writing it
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That’s funny. Phones can be silly
I like the premise and the story but the grammar is atrocious three times you called Spike slime and use k as I believe you need a good editor
Do you mean “just met” since meat is food?
Try:
Not sorry for posting corrections
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Thanks for the help! I appreciate it
And I guess you’ll to wait to find that out
Somehow the site didn’t show me this chapter till you replied. I guess the reporter is in love with Blaze? Anyways, you called the mare “mate” like a few times… and “hat” as well???
Twilight isn’t a pirate and this story isn’t a pirate theme so it’s definitely incorrect for yea to call this “crazy mare” mate or hat
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I think that’s the mistakes corrected, autocorrect keeps changing mare to mate
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Got to force that Pinkie Pie to stop messing with your work
I would assume Twilight in the hospital would had been on the news already?
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The way I envisioned it, the mane six stopped the news spreading outside Ponyville and Twilight and spike have only told Celestia and their family. Other than that, no one else knows
I understood nothing, but I liked it.
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I’ve gone back and tried to fix some of the mistakes but if I’ve missed any feel free to let me know.
Haha thank you, glad you’re enjoying it
Finally sat down to read this story, and I'm loving it so far!
Excited to see where this is going.
There have been several instances of the word man in the story so far despite having none introduced. Just ponies or other Equus’ creatures. Is there a narrative purpose for this?
A part of me is wondering if the mare is Celestia testing Twilight’s security and trolling Blaze for one or several reasons. I’m also assuming he’s being charged to B&E and steal something of Twilight’s. Could be wrong on all accounts.
Guess I was wrong
lol