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Badmiral Biscuit
Sometimes slice of life is saucy.
Badmiral Biscuit
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Latin Translation (for those who are curious):
A beard doesn't make one a philosopher, money don't smell. We strive for the forbidden, nobody dances sober, fortune favors the bold, thus indeed the wolf in the story.
It's a rough translation, it's been years since I took Latin and I wasn't very good at it.
EDIT: Chicago Ted fixed the Latin.
Well, this account has certainly gotten active this year. I remember way back when you mentioned you had a story in a secret alt account and I had to search for it from the clue you gave.
He fucking would.
Nice touch with Luna finishing the job. I hate when there's a change of heart.
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Yeah, I decided that participating in DirtyLittleSecret's contest would be a good way to shake off the winter blues and also flex my anthro and clop skills, then there's a good chance the account will go dormant again for a while . . . but who knows? We'll see what the future brings.
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I was legit considering having Loona meet one of Blitzø's OCs—especially since S2E3 had a whole list of 'em on a whiteboard—but it didn't quite work out.
Yeah, I don't think that Loona would be one to show mercy. She's got a job, she's going to do that job.
This is your official review for the Furry Foray Festival Contest!
I've tried to be as objective as possible, but of course there are limits. I've tried to avoid being biased or arbitrary as much as I can, and hopefully I've succeeded at least somewhat. The full, final results will be announced on May 4th, and winners will be contacted shortly afterward to ask how they would like to accept their prizes. When readings these comments, please keep in mind that I know I'm often overly critical -- to the point where I can always find nitpicks even with the greatest works of literature. So don't take anything personally!
Notes:
- I assume she has to use Bing Maps because Microsoft is the only tech company that serves Hell. Or else ... I hope you got paid for this product placement, lol.
- Neat details of Loona's sense of smell and not being able to see full color.
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What would it feel like to have his cock inside her?Love how this is just thrown in with a bunch of more sensible questions.- I don't think I've ever seen sex fighting quite like this before. It's ... unique.
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and he grabbed the front of her harness, between her breastsI thought he already took that off of her?- I do love the choice that she still finished the job in the end, lol. Ending in a murder, as a proper hate-fuck should. Maybe she'll see him again in Hell, though?
- The sheer over-the-top violence of everything seems to detract from any sensuality that might otherwise be present.
- One of the most violent clopfics I've ever read.
Scores:
Provocativeness: 65
Progression: 45
Payoff: 40
Pacing: 45
Personality: 55
Prose: 75
Total: 324
For more information on what these scores mean, see the scoring rubric.