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Sora21
Hope to share my skills as a writer and storyteller.
Sora21
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Amazingly well done.
Definitely top marks there.
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Thanks. Glad you liked it. Hope you’ll continue to check out my work in the future.
Congrats on your first successful story. Keep up the good work.
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I will.
Underexposed character, I approve!
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Thanks.
Good set-up and hot finish. All in all, a solid first story!
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Thanks.
Arctic.
I'm pretty sure you meant "and", not "as".
I really have no idea what you're trying to say here.
Foyer: 1. A lobby, corridor, or waiting room, used in a hotel, theater, etc.
2. The crucible or basin in a furnace which receives the molten metal.
So her uncle is the writer as well as the director? I mean it's not impossible, but it's not that common. Usually directors interpret a script that someone else has written.
That's a very awkward way of putting it; I think you might want to change your phrasing here.
Obvious typographical error.
What's your definition of "diner" if it isn't "a small restaurant" already?
Should be "sort of" in that first sentence, but I find myself wondering just what sort of meat he was working with. I mean, I'm no expert, but I've only ever worried about hidden bones with fish. With most of the meat I eat, the bones are pretty readily apparent.
The term is "in advance", and that really isn't that uncommon with restaurants.
I'm sorry, I wanted to enjoy this because I'm a sucker for girls in glasses (like Juniper), but I don't think I can finish reading it. Since I didn't read the whole story, I won't be voting either up or down on it.
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Your loss.
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Given your poor command of the language, I don't think it's much of a loss at all.
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Nah. Still your loss.
Wow, this was so amazing! I love how you show your OC's close relationship with Juniper. Keep up the good work and I won't mind if you made a sequel to this. 10/10
Happy 1st Anniversary!