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Chrysalesbian


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Queen Chrysalis gets freed from her marble prison only to get greeted by Princess Cadence, who hopes to redeem her.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

The concept is very very good. But ifeel things move way to fast m8.

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Indeed. It doesn’t even explain exactly what was going on with Chrysalis and Celestia. It was just completely out of nowhere.

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its explained more well in the prequel stories

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I THOUGHT THIS WAS A COMMENT ON ANOTHER STORY I WROTE SORRY!!! thanks for ur criticism but it was meant to be a reference to the comics where celestia caused the holes in chrysalis!!!

I liked them, but I’d suggest rewriting by expanding the story since it does seem rushed.

I don't really understand why they suddenly become girlfriends, and shining armor became ex husband.

This story should renamed to "the cuckholded of shining"

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