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Twilight, my child, what have you done?
That was a good story so far goodluck with the rest of it. Poor Twilight I hope she can redeem herself.
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Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate the encouragement. :)
That was a good story.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Perhaps you mean prodigy here? I've been enjoying this story and have been keeping my damn yap shut when i see issues like this 'cos it's not like my grammar is perfect either. But i can't keep silent any longer. Sorry! It's a good read, you just need an editor or sumpin.
The Dullness is a very cool adversarial effect and i commend your creativity. Makes me think of when the fake world in Coraline was unraveling.
Ooooo, nice, Discord and Zeccy teaming up. Hail Chaos!
'Tia stone cold lying to Zecora was disturbing.
Also good chapter-end cliffhanger.
Um, this is where you needed the word protege.
Prodigy = somepony really skilled
Protege = somepony who studies under and learns from one who is more experienced.
Yowza, this was sumpin else. (That is a complement, if i am not expressing myself clearly.)
Once I realized that Evening Star was Twilight, you had me thinking, for a while, that she was the ruins of an evil Twilight. I always find the notion of a truly evil Twilight very literally distressing. A Twilight who makes mistakes, i can deal with. A Twilight who makes mistakes and destroys everything, i can deal with. A Twilight who makes mistakes and destroys everything and fixes it again, yeah, that's the pony i love. Well done.
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Thank you. I wanted to emphasize how harmful good intentions can be. Having her be maniacal wouldn't just be boring, but untrue.
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I thought the former was more applicable, because Starlight is a prodigy despite being Celestia's protégé. I can see now I should have written "the prodigy" or "her protégé." Thanks for the heads up, I'll be sure to fix it.
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Thank you for the grammar checks. I appreciate you helping me improve the stories and I don't find them annoying at all!
I love Coraline. Neil Gaiman is one of the most inspirational authors to me and the stop-motion film is one of my favorite films.
Wow. This was an amazing story, thank you so much.