"No this isn't racist because I'm black" - Richard Pryor
Bart the Zebra has a tough life as a railroad worker until the day he hits the boss in the head with a shovel and is condemned to death. Meanwhile the original town of Appleoosa is dealing with thugs from the same railroad company destroying their town and killing their sheriff. When the townsponies appeal to the Princess for help, a very rich and greedy Attorney General steps in on behalf of the railroad (which he owns) and decides to send the zebra on death row to be the new sheriff. Can Bart save the town before the earth ponies kill him?
This was a commission from someone that I wrote last year, EqD said it was waaaaaay too offensive to zebras lol
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the reviews are in...
Anything in relation to a Mel Brooks production is a 10 outta 10 in my book. Unfortunately, going scene for scene from the actual movie feels... like a cop out.
I'm conflicted in whether or not I should like it or not...
Haven't read the story, just a pet peve i saw in your description. The thought that just because you're black, makes something less racist than it is? It annoys the ever loving crapola out of me. Racism, ironically enough, doesn't discriminate on who can use it. If you say something racist as a white guy, it'll be no more or less racist if you said it as a black guy. And as a black guy myself, i find that annoying.
-RANT OVER!-
Mel Brooks and ponies? You have combined two of the greatest things in the world... but at the same time there's the uneasy feeling that it's mostly just a script of the movie with pony names added in. Maybe don't make the references too glaring next time.
I loved this as this the ponified version of one of my films. You got damn every major line. I do wish you had done Young Frankenstein as well because they were released together as a double feature in 1974 and share many of the same actors.
GO DOLPHINS, MIAMI WHOOOO!!!!
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Don't forget to have them all run into your writing studio when they all end u p in hollywood!
I was afraid of that.
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i feel u brotha but that is a funny ass movie racist or not... richard pryor n mel brooks wrote it
Has potential to be funny, but needs improved grammar and better writing in general.
Concept is very good.
It flows really well, so I don't really care about grammer.
take some moustaches;
Molestia/tyrant Celestia/Trollestia is best Celestia.
Also, Fluttershy secretary
I NEED TO MEMORIZE THIS!!!!,THAT WAY I CAN HAVE A SPEECH OF SOMEKIND TO ROUND UP AN ARMY
Some grammar issues, though a few of those were more or less setting up for the time period and place. That was pretty much how they talked. The flow seems a tad off and misses the humor a bit. Feels kinda rushed. Overall great concept, poor execution.