I am an alternate universe explorer here to share my stories with you.
It’s Celestia’s birthday and her little sister Luna Is determined make sure that everything was perfect for her big sister’s special day. (Despite the not-so-great wakeup call) But when a portal opened out of nowhere and three humans comes out of it and literally crashed the party, and all hell breaks loose. What’s going to happen to them?
Your guess is as good as mine.
(This series starts a few weeks before the episode “best night ever”)
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To be honest, I couldn't get through the chapter. You're misspelling and misusing words, bad grammar, using bad punctuation (or, regarding your story description, none at all), and all the random capitalization you're using makes this very difficult to read.
If I were you, I'd think about getting an editor to review your work before you continue.
Why does the synopsis have randomly capitalized letters?
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Your guess is as good as mine.
Ok so I recently got an editor and fixed all the grammar and spelling mistakes in the original chapters.(thanks for the feedback)
interesting story so far
great chapter
great chapter
great chapter
i want to see what the princesses and twilight do about the brother's admirers
also great chapter
great chapter
Dam Celestia got angry in this one ha bluebells got in trouble
great chapter
So, when will they eventually meet the future villains like Discord, Chrysalis and her Changelings, Sombra, Sunset, Tirek, Dazzlings, Starlight, Stygain/Pony of Shadows, Storm King/Tempest Shadow, Cozy Glow, etc..
Don’t worry comrade discord is coming up soon, but I think you would love the chapters when chrysalis appears because let’s just say there’s a reason why I put a violence tag on the story.
The rest of the villains are coming in future sequels
great chapter
I want to see what happened during their vacation
great chapter
Great chapter
Great chapter
Six pony tribes?
In this universe, Equestria has six pony tribes. living in harmony for thousands of years.
These tribes are Unicorns, Pegasi, Earth ponies, Seaponies, Thestral(a.k.a. Batponies) last but not least kirins.
Damned! Was that really necessary.
Applejack/Apple Bloom/Big Mac parents are alive in this?
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Cool. Although, are the seaponies related to the Hippogriffs and their own version of seaponies?
Hah! True!
Geez, really not a fan of this cliche. And off topic, how the hell does she think she can go to prison? She is literally a frickin space goddess and the former empress!?
Plus, Celestia and Luna shouldn't be happy that their parents are threatening their human boyfriends like that.
There’s a reason why they’re doing that. And the only hint I’m going to tell you is that the pony in question is related to the crystal empire.
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It's Sombra, isn't it?
Yep it’s him.
Hey is it just me or that flag looks the same from Japan summons. I can't remember which country but the flag looks similar 🤔
Great chapter
Great chapter
Why doesn't she know that?
i want to see this as a chapter but the first part the most
great chapter
Let me guess: Celestia’s birthday is connected to why she hates the GGG so much.
Great chapter
Great chapter
Why didn’t you reply to my comment?
Great chapter
More like the beginning of the Equestrain-Changling war. Can't wait. I already have a music for the battle.
Really dick move from Arty, just hit someone cowering like that, esếpcially in the head. Beside being a brat, he didn’t fight someone to get that
Why only BB get sent to the hospital? Maybe Arty kick was too strong, knock him out cold, then he get stomp by the animal
i hope u plan to continue the story
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Don’t worry comrade, a sequel is coming soon. I’m glad you enjoy the story.
I bet after witnessing how goddamn effective Equestria military is, other country will start gear up their army, maybe spent spy to learn about their new weapons
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Blueblood wasn’t the only one that went to the hospital.(Believe me, I witnessed it.) Artemis’s kick wasn’t the reason why he was unconscious. He fainted when one of the animals.(A small sugar glider.) landed on him. But he did receive some scratches from birds and small woodland creatures.
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That’s a good question. Many consider hippogriffs to be a cousin species to sea ponies because their culture is similar and their ocean form are also similar to sea ponies.
Thanks to these similarities, sea ponies and hippogriffs have a friendly relationship with each other for thousands of years.
Ay, nice ending. I'll keep in toucb to when the sequel comes.
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then Fluttershy must feel horrible for not only spooking the animals but also harming the guests