Proofreaded 20.08.2022 by dearest DustyDominic!
The Heart's Warming Eve is approaching; all creatures in Equestria and beyond are preparing for this amazing holiday, and students are going home to celebrate it with their families. Sandbar is making final preparations for departure when he suddenly notices that his friend, Gallus, does not share everyone's joy. Now the colt will not rest until he finds a way to cheer up his feathered pal.
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Thanks, I fixed that)
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Still missing the "t" at the end of "about" before "grammar"
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Heh, not anymore
It’s ironic I said I was sure about grammar while I made 3 grammar mistakes in just a description, lmao
Cant wait 4 more
Seed... I think you meant ( seem ).
veryone I think you meant ( everyone. )
world?"Sandbar needs a space.... = world?" Sandbar
such should all be lower cased... because there isn't shouting...
one = one, a comma needs to be there.
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Thanks greatly!
Oh dear.
Otherwise, this was a touching fic. You did a great job on setting the mood for each of the scenes.
I always saw Gallus as a guitarist.
That was beautiful