• Member Since 12th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 21st, 2017

Simon_oSullivan


Brony, Whovian, gamer, writer, reviewer, riffer, have a beard... I guess that's pretty much it.

E

Twilight's nervous for her first date with Summer Breeze, and takes a dating book with her to make sure that it'll be perfect. Things don't end up as she expected, but she still gets a date she'll never forget.

My entry for the Starswirl Academy. The prompt was "Twilight on her first date with a male character", and that's what I wrote.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

Picture is too cute :yay: this had better be good!

Edit: D'awwww I don't usually approve of OC pairings but this was nice. Good job, if a little cheesy. :rainbowkiss:

-is jelly of Breeze-

Aw how nice, but that ending, well I don't know if anyone else was thinking what I'm thinking but let's just say Spike had better be asleep or else well he won't like what he hears. :twilightsheepish:

cute squared, I have to ask though.....is summer a background pony or an OC? (im fine either way id just like to know)

1297419

Ah, the wonders of a dirty mind:rainbowlaugh:

1297841

As you can see in the character tag, Summer Breeze is an OC. Nothing extraordinarily unique, which might be the cause of your doubts. I consider the confusion a compliment, though. :pinkiehappy:

1297905 Oh you WERE thinking what I was thinking, well good at least no one's calling me a sick you-know-what for thinking that. :eeyup:

Coincidence i think NOT :rainbowlaugh:
Funny how I am just like the summer you described in the fic :derpyderp2: and I made my account before reading this :twilightoops: destiny much?

1310316

Wait a sec... *checks the fic* *check's the poster's name* Well, that was unexpected.

The thing is that I tried to choose a very pony name, and Summer Breeze sounded quite well. Coincidently, the original name of the main character from the SA project was going to be Summer Skies, so I almost nailed that one. But yes, I understand that it must feel... strange to see your ponysona's or OC's name in a fic that you never heard about.

Have you been reading my writing notes? :trixieshiftleft: This sounds alot like my notes. :trixieshiftright:
:twilightsheepish: Kidding, of course, but I was with you all the way in alot of this. I have a fic I've been planning, and there have been moments like this, including the stargazing, the book, and the Romeo reference. It's like you wrote what I had in my head all along! Kudos!

A short but great writing! Cuteness overload :twilightblush:

Login or register to comment