Twilight's nervous for her first date with Summer Breeze, and takes a dating book with her to make sure that it'll be perfect. Things don't end up as she expected, but she still gets a date she'll never forget.
My entry for the Starswirl Academy. The prompt was "Twilight on her first date with a male character", and that's what I wrote.
Picture is too cute this had better be good!
Edit: D'awwww I don't usually approve of OC pairings but this was nice. Good job, if a little cheesy.
Dat picture //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
This is good
-is jelly of Breeze-
Aw how nice, but that ending, well I don't know if anyone else was thinking what I'm thinking but let's just say Spike had better be asleep or else well he won't like what he hears.
cute squared, I have to ask though.....is summer a background pony or an OC? (im fine either way id just like to know)
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Ah, the wonders of a dirty mind
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As you can see in the character tag, Summer Breeze is an OC. Nothing extraordinarily unique, which might be the cause of your doubts. I consider the confusion a compliment, though.
1297905 Oh you WERE thinking what I was thinking, well good at least no one's calling me a sick you-know-what for thinking that.
well your ok!
(p.s. good read here a hilariously weak pony for you)
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Coincidence i think NOT
Funny how I am just like the summer you described in the fic and I made my account before reading this destiny much?
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Wait a sec... *checks the fic* *check's the poster's name* Well, that was unexpected.
The thing is that I tried to choose a very pony name, and Summer Breeze sounded quite well. Coincidently, the original name of the main character from the SA project was going to be Summer Skies, so I almost nailed that one. But yes, I understand that it must feel... strange to see your ponysona's or OC's name in a fic that you never heard about.
Have you been reading my writing notes? This sounds alot like my notes.
Kidding, of course, but I was with you all the way in alot of this. I have a fic I've been planning, and there have been moments like this, including the stargazing, the book, and the Romeo reference. It's like you wrote what I had in my head all along! Kudos!
A short but great writing! Cuteness overload