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Alphamon_Ouryuken

"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

Alphamon_Ouryuken Joined 20th Jun, 2013 · Offline

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Leanansidhe
Leanansidhe #1 · Feb 1st, 2022 · · 1 ·
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I really want to read this... but I dont want to wait for my lunch break. NSFW only counts if your coworkers catch you, right?

Vallss of dungor
Vallss of dungor #2 · Feb 1st, 2022 · · 2 ·
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So where would I find the thumbnail for obvious reasons

LewdChapter
LewdChapter #5 · Mar 26th, 2022 · · 1 ·
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This was a fun take that I wasn't really expecting. A bit too an weeb-y for my tastes, but it was still quite enjoyable. I'm a sucker for chastity/denial, and this was executed pretty well.

I will say, your Aria and Dash don't really feel like Aria and Dash. Rainbow shows almost none of her rebellious qualities, and Aria feels far too eloquent, almost soft-spoken. Honestly, if you had told me this story was initially about Adagio and Sonata, and you just switched the names to Aria and Dash, I'd believe you.

Thank you for your submission!

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