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Ooooh heck yeah, it's back baybeee! Can't read it just yet since I'm engrossed into another story at the moment, but I'm definitely reading this immediately after!
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No rush, I have 70+ chapters to upload! And a few more to write, epilogue wise. But the ending is solidified; just got to do some editing work now.
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Oh boy, so we're in for a definite treat eh? This is gonna be good, looking forward to it, mate.
Quick note for the author: You may want to add a chapter to Inertia, simply to say that this sequel exists. I stumbled across this sequel through my feed, and almost ignored it as the name wasn't familiar. Had I realized it was a sequel to a story I enjoyed, I would have jumped on it immediately.
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Oh, sorry! I'll do just that.
I was thinking of typing up a quick, short chapter to tack on to Inertia, and this gives me reason to. Thanks a million.
Unless there's a lot of sexy time going on that you didn't write, this word should be LIPS.
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I have two editors, one of which spent several days going over each chapter individually - and still, one or two errors will sneak through the cracks.
GG, no re. Fixed it, though.
Awesome story. loving everything you've written so far - minus a single misspelled word. Looking forward to the next chapters, but I must ask - why is the story marked as complete, when it clearly isn't? Or are you going to post the rest of the chapters under a new story?
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It's complete because I have ALL of the chapters written, but, I was told not to upload them all at once - otherwise it'll never have any attention directed towards it.
That, and my editor (Brony1337) wants to look over a few dozen more before I upload them all. Trust me. I want to upload them. I ticked complete because I want people to know that EVERYTHING is written for it.
You keep posting chapters like Vee drinks her coffee, and you keep us all hooked. Nice job so far!
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Well, nearly every chapter is done, but really, I should just content dump up to my editor's completed chapters.
But thanks. :3c
I've binged your two stories in a matter of days, keep up the great work! Can't wait to see what you have in store!
And here. We. Go. So far a really good prologue, very well written and gave just enough info to refresh my memory of what happened in the previous story.
Leave it to Umbra to do something like that lol ah priceless.
Uh oh, they're catching on.... not good, not good at all
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It's already finished on my end, I just need to edit the last 25 chapters (out of 90) and have my editors give a passover on what I have left.
From there, I just have epilogue writing - which I'll slow down for, 'cause I did all of this in around... 45 days?
Imagine my surprise and pleasure when a story series I binged in two days is updated the day after - not just once, but FOUR times
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Pfft, I could upload all of the unedited chapters now, if you'd like. Or, you can PM me, and I can just add you to the list.
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I am seriously tempted to get on that list, but at the same time, I've really enjoyed the rate I'm going.
How's about this, let me ask you a question;
Should I expect an update very often (like today) or is the number of uploads in the last few days not normal for your stories?
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I typically write the majority of my stories all at once, but we're about to hit a wall where my editor wants me to stop so they can finish editing 30 more chapters.
And I need to go over them myself, too. So you're gonna hit that wall at 60, I'm afraid - which means you'll get like, maybe 2-3 a day, up to 5.
That conic at the end is phenomenal!
And just like that Vee solidifies herself as one of my favorite characters haha
Tempest Shadow, the Doom Slayer........ ya know, I actually like the idea of that haha
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I'm happy you're enjoying it. <3
Tree friends, always good to have
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I never asked, but a favorite character in the story, or a favorite character of all time?
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What a question is that, Smol-fry? Vee’s gotta be a fav of all the characters ever! She’s got bits to snoot up, her shop needs the attention!
Damm Umbra is Brutal.
Oh these two are great. Love them already.
~Reggie
Not gonna lie this made me cackle like a madman
Not sure if you read my reply to your blog post, Pumpkin Pony, but you really upped the 'peril' in these recent chapters with Nightmare Moon and the Entity here. I really felt the terror of its influence and the frantic pace of the ponies running down into the mines. Excellent job!
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Oh! Thank you!
I thought I did better in my other chapters, as party members use and abuse resources until there's just... nothing left, but I guess this works, too.
I'm going to write a final few followup chapters, after a little hiatus - but after Chapter 92, I consider this story "complete" enough for me to mark it as such. The rest is just details.
Hnng..... my heart...... that last bit, just perfect.
Vee, you wonderful purple, you!
OK a blue griffon, nothing unusual about that.
...... no, don't you fuckin dare!
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I don't know whether to hate you, or to give you the highest of fives for this.........
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I had to do it to 'em.
And Vee had to do it to 'em.
Last chapter is ready, waiting on my editor to give it one last look over.
Still need to write one more "round up" chapter that catches the last of the loose ends. But really... this story is done enough for me, and it means I can finally write my own book. Inspired by like, 20 sources, it has the makes to be either really good, or outright hated by anyone who isn't interested in this kind of stuff.
By the way, Vee is based on a real person! Er... pony. And I've written her pretty much accurately, except with a totally wild and made up backstory.
In truth, Vee is just Vee. She exists in many places, many universes - but she's perhaps the best character to write. Of course she's going to show up in everything I do, from now on - especially once I become a published author.
No don't end now jk I love this story
You killed my boi
He was so young
So cool
He was the best of us
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Not yet.
Keep reading.
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The YET there scares me even more.
Quite a dire situation, I hope luna holds through this
Arin put that poor mare on one hell of an emotional rollercoaster
Dude really went all out right before the big thing he had to do to save... well, a lot
That's... horrible, celestia is going to need a therapist and a snuggle buddy stat
Clumsy mistake. Always, ALWAYS put things back exactly how you found them, a pen on the wrong side of the desk will tip somebody off if they're not preoccupied
Aw, mystery bird does care
I don't think he should give up on luna at all, but they're adorable together
Sleeping is torture, staying awake is near impossible, a real catch 22 I'd say
I think celestia is very needed at the moment, this political situation is probably the worst one out there