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Lunasservant1985
i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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I like this, but there were some parts that I believe could be more effective if written in a certain way.
If you're interested, I can be your editor for this story and help you out. Free services, y'know what I'm sayin'?
Eh, this wasn’t what I was expecting. I was expecting an ending involving no longer wanting to kill Chrysalis, and Chrysalis to say how he actually saved her from dying. Then the two get to be sour lovers.
9026I don't see a tragedy tag!
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really its more like shes a worthy opponent now and annons ready to give a fair fight, evenly matched, its what they wanted not the easy way put for either of them, plus the title and yhe general plot is meant to be an anti rededemption stoy
Maybe an update with some crazy mix of love making and attempted murder defining their relationship?
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maybe...i...im not as active as i was back in the beggining...eal life work and all that has a way of..catching up to you
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Some spell checking would also help.