One day my heart felt heavy so I set it down. Then I lost it, someone stole it because it was made of gold. Yours looks heavy, can I borrow a piece? I'll return it when I find mine.
Scootaloo is pushed to her limits and driven to achieve her goal of flying with Rainbow Dash. Due to the methods that are chosen, Rainbow Dash is left with some emotional scars.
This story was inspired by two videos I saw, which I will credit at the end. It’s also experimental seeing as I know they would work great together, so I’m challenging myself to do just that.
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I liked this. Though I get the sense I wish their was about a hundred more word's.
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I could do an epilogue with Rainbow Dash paying Scootaloo a visit (or have her and Fluttershy mentioning it). As stated, this was an experiment. I’m also not great with endings because I only know how to keep stories going.
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I’ll brainstorm on it a bit more in my free time.
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I vibe. Honestly half of my story ideas are expriements in just wanting to see if it worked. I saw the expriement thing but forget about it. I 'll be honest I hope to see more expriemental stuff from you. Because I love the sheer? Expansive creativity it can breed?
Honestly ending's are really just begining in reverse. Your beggining or rather ending had small arc. That hinted at past event's and closed a story we the reader can only imagine. I think your better then you think...obviously practice makes perfect. In fact one of my planned excerises is write say...a bunch throw away short stories.
Not even giving a hoot about grammar just after my brain sort going through the process of coming up with a idea.. then capping it off. After all their are more then one way to write endings? Heck some people probably thought some stories I have read and hated the ending... and loved it.
Cheer's!
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Then you may like ‘gifts from a friend’ that one was a rough draft turned story, in other words also ‘experimental’ but with more originality. Although it’s quite a bit darker, if that’s not your style then maybe ‘it’s not contagious’ which is more on the comedy spectrum. But by now, I’m just self promoting my stories to you. You don’t have to read them if you don’t want to.
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Read both I liked both. Though obviously one was darker. I thought both were creative. I especially liked the alternate ending for the darker story.
The lighter one was good as well.
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I finally managed to extend it a bit.
And managed to post a two more stories if you’re looking for something to read.