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This story might just tie into future stories I write following the events of DIbs on My Sister.
Klamnei appears in the comments in three, two, one...
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I assume you just have that URL memorized by now.
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Not sure who that is.
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It does get a lot of play, doesn't it?
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Klamnei is an author who wrote a pregnancy fetish fic titled Fecundity. As this has little to do with that fetish, I was mainly being silly.
Sorry.
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You're okay, dude! I named it Fecundity after the two definitions of the word: to be overly productive in the reproductive sense and to have very many ideas - be very creative. This anthology is intended to showcase some of the creative ideas I've had over the years. Also, Roseluck just loves producing offspring.
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So take off all yo clothes!
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Glad you're enjoying yourself!
Love this universe lol 👍
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Thanks! This is the product of many years of just thinking about what kind of world Roseluck lives in. Shame it overwrites so much of the older canon but you gotta break a few eggs to make an omelette, ya know?
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Canon can be fluid here, if you're open minded
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Yeah, I'm going to be rewriting a lot about Roseluck's story. My advice is to expect the unexpected.
THe way it's described makes me think that Charon needs a fillyfriend soon. Maybe Roseluck can find him one that fits her presumably strict criteria. This was well written.
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Thanks! Though, if you want spoilers on who Charon ends up with, you might consider reading this.
This was an interesting start and I loved the banter between Rose and Europa.
The idea is interesting, for sure.
But this, right here, is the reason I'm gonna read this:
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Gravity makes everything more interesting.
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yep. no regerts.
This was amazing. Well written. Very well written.
The motherly vibes of Roseluck come off as completely genuine. They don’t feel shoehorned in at all. Even the idle thought of teacher her son is handled very well.
Bravo. Liked and watched.
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I'm very glad you liked it! You may have forgotten to click a button somewhere though. I didn't get a notification of this story or myself are being watched.
This lore is fascinating. Generational curses are...so interesting.
Also...a 3 hour marathon seems about right. That young with a freshly minted libido and barely any time to handle it, you're gonna have a lot of pent up energy. I know it sounds extreme, it it really not. Happens to plenty of people.
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This is the first time I've heard someone point out the extreme outlier nature of some of the more nitty-gritty aspects of my writing like the full-on equinized cursing/anatomical descriptions. Most people just say "fuck" "cock" "pussy" and "balls".
I'm going to find out what chapter 3 will be today from my patron but expect it to be Roseluck letting out that pent-up libido of hers for 8k+ words or more.
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I just saw this. And you were right.
Fixed
Next chapter when?
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Probably never. The guy who paid me for the first two chapters has gone silent. RIP, Fecundity.
Welcome back, Fecundity! It’s good to see your return along with Roseluck’s many means of sex and glory. I had a good time prereading this. It’s good to know how much she actually takes after her great x 3 grandmother, who even long-departed gets to experience the joys of sex through her again. Rose is truly earning her place as the Element of Eros.
I said this in prereads, but I’ll say it again here; I really hope that Rose tells her sister about her meeting with Rosa later. I’d think if anypony deserves to know about that, it’s her given how much she did to help Rose here.
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Don't worry friend. It will happen first thing next chapter!
This was good chapter everything was well written and enjoyable.
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Thanks!
Welcome back, Fecundity! You’re remembered and have been missed. Rose’s story needs to be told, and this certainly suits her!
I’ll be coming back to this to do a running commentary later. It deserves it, especially after the comments I left on the google doc.
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Excellent! I'm glad to hear you're going to leave a comment later. Thanks again for the editing!
I'm glad to see another schapter of this story. House really has some difficulty adjusting to the culture of Rose's tribe but he does seem to accept it at the end of the chapter.
One of the things Rose picked up from her time living amongst thestrals was their enjoyment of being wrappled in blankets like a bat burrito. I blame Megabattie for that.
Rose, I've written a 400,000 word story in Firely, which you and Lily (as well as Linkie and Twinkie!) occasionally enjoyed commenting on, and C&C just hit half a million words. So you'll forgive me if I realy don't have much sympathy for you, here.
She's right in that that doing so would have been a bit anticlimactic. Pun intended. But nice to know she listens to feedback!
Maybe he's got some Shenlandian pony in him!
Only pegasus fillies, HC. Earth ponies hate flying or being off the ground. Unless of course, in Rose's case, she's being taken while hung upside-down.
Well, that would have been a bridge too far for her. Actually, I think it would be fun if some of Rose's old siblings came by to visit at some point. I'm sure they'd be equally amazed at what became of her. Did Rosa Salvaje ever enjoy the company of bat-ponies?
And you as well, House, for doing so well that Rosa herself saw fit to take part!
Sex in the Summerlands is boring.
At least there's one element of seriousness here. Yeah, despite all fantasy, that's not really something you really want to go full-bore with on the first time. It's honestly something you have to work up to and learn to enjoy. And take precautions even when you do. Not a critical issue here, though--must be nice have earth pony healing powers to aid your recovery!
Like I said on the parent Google Doc, pity the poor mare mother whose foal got a cutie mark in bungee jumping.
Looks like you've got a typo there. "Mom'ssnapped herself" should be "Mom snapped herself"?
That's how it was for me too, growing up, minus the long ears. The entire cul-de-sac would participate in parties and bring various food out, making for a very nice buffet. The best times were the 4th of July, when we set off fireworks in the middle of the cul-de-sac, including the illegal kind.
That's a double-entendre if I've ever heard one.
Rarity still wants to kill Pinkie whenever she hears that name.
Poor guy is already getting performance anxiety. Can't really blame him, either!
Rose may not be ibexian, but she's mastered the fine art of Maskirovka well!
Only a pegasus or griffon can truly understand the exquisite embarrassment of uncontrollable wingboners. :rainbowderp2:
Somewhere a thousand miles away, eleven-year old Lily Valley didn't know why she suddenly felt flushed and flustered.
That would explain why she's so into anal probes.
Good description!
Actually, it does! Where I can find this world? And is the portal to it somewhere near the Philippines?
I really like the whole sequence that preceded this, where House explains where his discomfort is coming from. It makes sense to me. Kind of like it's something you may have fantasized about, but then seeing it acutally happening for real is something else entirely. Disconcerting as hell.
Celestia only agreed to let her face appear on the bottles if there was also a warning about too much sun exposure and not to go into the water too soon after eating.
I'm a Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough ice cream guy myself.
Hey at least they're not difficult-to-pronounce pony names like Twilight Sparkler!
A fertile filly feeding frenzy!
Actually, it wouldn't surprise me if Cassandra was a Changeling or they frequented this place, for obvious reasons.
Double phrase. I think the second one was supposed to be removed?
Don't be a backseat driver, Rose! Or a backdoor rutter in this case...
Seeing is believing, HC! I think he's properly initiated into the ways of Rose's New Neighican tribe now.
That's okay, Rose. There will still be a chance to use it in the war against the Cloven! Or after...
And the author's! So that's my first longpost comment in quite a while, in celebration of Fecundity's return. Hope you enjoyed! Look forward to seeing more of this story too, in the future. Rose's tale deserves to be told. I'd say I'm all ears for more, but mine don't even begin to compare to hers!
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Eeeeeeeeeee!
We can't all have your impossible stamina and iron buttocks to sit and write all of that! If we could only be so lucky.
I had basically no idea how start the chapter and feeling pretty demoralized, decided to go the "meta" route one rarely sees in my stories. I thought it turned out surprisingly well given the on record comments I've made against this very thing in fiction.
Fun fact: New Mexico has a much smaller population than Nevada due to the entire state being in the four seasons zone of the Western US. Nevada, on the other hand, experiences warm winters along the entire southern half of its borders, including Phoenix. In other words, It gets chilly where Roseluck lives and that body heat is much appreciated.
There is the curious case of Amelia Mareheart though.
The first guy who sponsored this story really wanted that anal scene so I had to write it for him. With him gone, I can chart a new path away from tiny fillies getting butt plunged.
That said, I'm glad the serious element didn't pull you out of the story. This saga is very much a product of fantasy almost to the point of irony in places with House along for the ride as the straight man in what could almost be viewed as the aftermath of Eclipse winning the war against the heroes in UtM:NN.
I'd rather my daughter have a cutie mark in sex than bungee jumping.
Good catch. Thanks!
Hell yes! Me and the boys used to unleash hell in the grade-school parking lot every 4th of July.
This is where the Apocalypse Now really takes over! A true descent into Hell.
I will simp for The Last Roundup until the day I die. Underappreciated by the fandom despite its flaws. A true classic, even if the excuse to split the Mane Six was entirely non-existent. I just love season 2 as a whole. I would make love to it if we ever met...
I'm thinking Kerin Kazal would be proud, and Trucy Wright for that matter!
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Don't worry. She'll get hers! You think a universe centered around COVID-19 is going to the only one where she gets lucky? Think again!
I never thought about that angle before but the grays would get quite a shock to see Roseluck chasing down the flying saucer for the honor of getting probed.
My best writing happens after I take feedback. This chapter especially.
You might say the portal is closer to Japan, actually...
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One of my better efforts, honestly. I like that section a lot too.
Cakelestia certainly knows those risks!
I am too but it was the first flavor I thought of.
Good ol' Turnabout Storm! What a time it was.
A free all-you-eat buffet in the desert? Yes please!
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Fixed.
Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the longpost! I'm tempted to do another chapter of this immediately! But I'll need to talk with PI about that. I already know what happens in the next chapter. Ironic, isn't it? The one story I have an actual useable outline for is the endless sex one...
Wonderful work.
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Why thank you! Didn't know you read this one, SB.
This was a good chapter and I can only assume that ration between mares and stalllions became more even after Twilight arrived.
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It does seem that way in the show.
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I do when I remember to check my feed!