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AJ Aficionado
The Guy who wrote "Dibs on My Sister". Prereader for Firesight. I'm not dead, only dreaming.
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Fun to read, fun to edit, and one hay of a wild ride! Thanks for writing this, AJA! Certainly allows me to indulge some of my more out-there interests...
My favorite parts outside of the clop were actually Discord's appearance. I think you nailed his lines and personality. I also really like the Rose/Lily backstory, which makes their role-reversal and swapping of personalities all the more yummy. Ponies acting against type can be a real turn-on, and Discord corrupting them in such a matter is a very fun premise. "Won't somepony pleaaase think of the Lily?" Classic line!
Out of all of my stories, this was the one I enjoyed writing the most. I just wanted to see if I could write for two genre's I dont even follow. My only regret is the tags suggest that Discord is going to be participating. It might be scaring people away.
I'm impressed.
This very rarely happens, you've a knack for writing, my friend.
6427936 I overdid it on the number of fetishes in here. That explains my awful likes/views metric. I'm glad you liked it though.
6428294 Thanks. I'll admit though, I consider this my most notable failure at least statistically. I guess Fimfiction just wasn't into this one.
6429228 Probably uploaded at a bad time and burried beneath a million other things.
6430323 I posted an hour early due to Fimfiction hiring a new mod, but that wasn't the issue. Actually, I was up against The Abyss who posted his latest clop before mine. Poor Fertile Ground got sacrificed to the clop god.
Note to self: don't post stories after The Abyss; you will get curb stomped. 
The story is still doing fine at 50/7 in 24 hours. I just worked really hard on this and hope it does well. I appreciate your vote of confidence, good sir!
6430396 Heh, if Pen Stroke, The Abyss or Whatmustido updates/posts something, wait at least a day until you post yours, else It'll be forgotten.
Rose's body-language combined with her dialogue, pre-conversion were great. It's easy to see why the
Lily's visit by the D and her conversion were just perfect. She never had even the slightest chance of resisting.
That left me wanting a little more from Rose's. However, the way it played out was very convincing.
"Mayday, mayday, bogey at 6 o'clock!"
It was odd that Daisy's corrupted form was her care for plants taken to the extreme, and not the opposite. Is this meant to have something to do with how her magic and the magic of the Tentaculus were interacting? Or, am I just thinking too much into it?
Fun little trip! Great job!
I commend you for picking that out, it's a legit seam in the story's edifice. Let me explain:
My idea was that the corruption followed different lines. Discord intervened with Lily and Rose directly, but with Daisy he just tweaked events in favor of a certain outcome; an outcome Daisy was already okay with. Discord did not manipulate Daisy, she very willingly took responsibility for healing the plant to the extreme of her own volition.
Amazing comment, I only wish I could upvote it twice. Thanks for the follow!
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An outcome that may have contributed to his re-imprisonment. Hmmmm, what are you playing at Discord? Or, like most Chaotic beings, he doesn't always act in his own best interests.
6433891 His only desire was to see things as they shouldn't be, not contribute to his re-imprisonment. So he made Roseluck a fooler (depending on your interpretation of Roseluck as a character, there is more than one way to view her sexuality), Lily a pickup artist, and most sinister of all, forced one of the purest of earth ponies to willingly corrupt herself.
Indeed, this story would have had a very bad ending, not to mention a dark tag, had not harmony been restored to the land.
All five of my stories have a Roseluck that is written the same way. If you really want to overdose on rose pony, check out A Gentleman's Price: 50,000+ words worth of first-person Roseluck with an M-rating.
Beautiful. Nuff said.
6442863 I'm honored, thank you.
6443252 ya know what? I just checked your stories and realized I've read every single one you've posted so far! (Minus siege) so to mark this occasion, have a fallow.
6443899 What did you think of the other stories, if you don't mind me asking?
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Fair enough. This story retains some of the tendencies of the Gentlemanverse such as calling their planet "Tellus", so it's a fair point to bring up. Thing is, I'm keeping this story outside of the canon while making the event itself a part of A Gentleman's Price. I have a couple different reasons for this, but mainly it's placed so far back in time, it's just show canon at this point. Think of Five Star Service in its current form.
Then I have succeeded. Thanks for giving my admittedly dubious and somewhat extreme piece of clop a chance!
Mm hmm. Top kek. Have a like, good sir/maam. Top show old chap!
6662815 Jolly good m8. I'm right chuffed you liked me silly clopfic. Fair seas and following winds to ye Admiral Nelson.
I love this story so much.
This was glorious.
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Thanks bro!
If you're an Applejack fan, then why do you write almost exclusively about Roseluck?
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Applejack is my favorite of the Mane Six but I'm weirdly uninspired as to writing fiction based around her. Something about Roseluck just speaks to me. She's my muse.
What. Could possibly. Go. Wrong?
Really fun! And some nice world building with Daisy.
Aww, I wanted to see where Lily and Rose went
As promised, my longposts begin! This’ll be the first of several, given the amount of material in here.
And I'm a bit drunk, but you don't see me complaining. Poor Rose, without customers or an available stallion. Whatever will we do? If only there was ome chaos god around to spice things up...
Her only hope...?
Save her, Lily! She's starved for stallion attention!
Not that you ever noticed, of course.
A product of one AJ_Aficionado, who under different circumstances might have named himself Roseluck_Rapture
Rose is powered by rutting, Lily. And with ability to seduce any stallion she chooses, she will change the world! Of course, that leaves open the possibiity of being waylaid by some mare who can show her a whole new world...
I blame her comic books showing impossibly idealized mare models crossed with too much chocolate milk.
I know, right? That's as normal and natural as thestral stallions humping each other and Prince Blueblood!
Typical Lily: Fire is the only answer. And the only who should be doing the breeding is her!
You're really asking for it Rose. And all it will take is some recently-released chaos god looking for some additional amusement outside of corrupting the element bearers to do it!
Why ask when she can show?
Don't think I didn't spot that Kill Bill reference!
Still a great movie. And Budd was the only one to actually defeat The Bride. Gotta love Quentin Tarantino!
Oh really? So what's her pay policy on Coronavirus? Or the curse from Nightmare Night?
or better yet: say hello to My Little Pony! (skip to 1:38)
Soon to make a guest appearance in Nightmare Night. It seems Daisy wasn't the first pony to encounter this!
“Hey, you wanted to help!” Daisy replied heatedly, her face flushing at the thought of where her friend’s imagination must be going. If you think her imagination is going there, where is yours going, Daisy? To say nothing of the readers! We've already seen the story description and the groups this has been added to!
Sorry, Rose, but Ponyville in general and AJ's barn in particular will be ground zero for all sorts of destructive phenomena. It's just part and parcel of living in Ponyville and having so much exotic magic around! But the fringe benefit is you get all the stallions you can lay and the occasional sexually transmitted curse to keep things interesting.
Maybe someday I'll tell your story in Nightmare Night...
If it makes you feel any better, Rose, Ponyville will be destroyed or endangered many times over. If you think it's bad now, just wait until Tirek comes through! RIP Golden Oaks Library. It was also the last time we ever saw owlowiscious.
Lily's greatest fear. She'd actually be happy for Coronavirus forcing everybody indoors and into social isolation. Then again, most of the bars are closed now.
Fun fact: back in the 1918 Spanish Flu epidemic, one of the cities that handled the outbreak better actually allowed saloons to remain open, on the condition that each customer could only stay for one drink. Who knows; maybe consuming alcohol killed the bugs before it could take hold.
I know she was pretty dazed, but not so much she repeated her own thought twice.
Whereas Blueblood has to figure out there's such a thing as sex WITH stallions involved! Thestral stallions, to be specific... but what if Rose discovered them as well?
I blame Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo for this in its entirity. If they hadn't fought in front of Discord's statue and provided an extra infusion of chaos power, he'd never have broken free. CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS, CHAOS GOD COLLABORATORS, YAY!
Thankfully for you, Rose, this is a crazy clopfic and not some horror movie!
Hope you enjoyed part 1 of my longpost comment! More will certainly follow...
Rose and Lily sounds like me when I was trying to force myself to go to dating site mixers. I hated them with all my soul. Meat markets where you get instantly judged and I had no idea what to do or how to carry myself.
I love this paragraph. Gets across who Lily is and her social anxieties quite nicely.
Hey, if you want insulting, hang out with Blueblood a spell. Pre-curse, of course!
They do, Rose. And it's working perfectly.
I sympathize, Lily. I know the feeling quite well.
Well, considering this is an AJA clopfic after he's just discovered tentacles and futa...
Just be glad this didn't happen in Nightmare Night, Lily!
Just as long as it's real transformation and you're not just 'identifying' as one, please.
In a manner of speaking, Lily. Discord's corruptive magic at its finest! And best of all, he doesn't charge anything for transgender transformations. His payment is his own amusement. God, I love Discord, and this story depicts him believably.
Whew!
Sorry, Rose, but Blueblood is now monopolizing them!
Uh... ick?
I guess that would be a surprise, though...
Not-so-fun fact: I once was trying to get dressed quickly because there was a knock at the door, and I caught something in zipper I shouldn't have... Ouch!
Superb description!
Don't worry, Lily. If Rose is oblivious to your crush on her after this long, she's certainly oblivious to anything you might be packing now. So much the better!
Obligatory. But instead of just linking the video, I'll link the kids react to it:
I learned earplay from you, you know! Consider that at least one point where you corrupted me instead of the other way around!
It may just be Discord's corruptive effect, but I like the idea that the normally aggressive and toppish Rose will actually respond to somepony submitting her, in an interesting role reversal.
I love this kind of thing. Don't know why, but it's a huge turn-on to me.
That's the stuff! Milk this for everything it's worth, Lily! Chocolate milk, of course...
And I got the idea of aroused mares having very tasty scents from you as well!
Your goddess? That happens in Earthmother, Lily!
End comment part 2.
Singular/plural conflict. There's only one plant, even if it has multiple appendages, so "it was a very hearty plant" would be more correct.
Not everypony can have a green hoof, Daisy. They have other interests; Rose has her stallions, and Lily has her comics and Rose herself.
The plot thickens! So do the vines, I'm sure...
I love avacadoes. I'd add them to a lot more than I do if they weren't so expensive and quickly overripe/spoiled.
Oh, I don't know... some would say it had just begun!
Seriously, what, specifically, did he do here?
Asked and answered, I guess!
Well, don't feel too bad, Daisy. Annie Smith took advantage of them too in her long-ago youth!
I like how you had earth pony magic be concentrated on the hooves. They were often given short shrift in canon as far as their strength and abilities went. Not here!
Didn't realize you were into that sort of thing, Daisy!
There is such a thing as a foot fetish, of course, but like so many other fetishes, if you're not into it, you don't get it. I'm one of the latter.
Excellent indrect description of her scream of pleasure.
She'd get along swimmingly with Owlia, then!
Totally worth it!
"Hello, everypony, and welcome to the first support group meeting of TTA--Tentaculous Tuckers Anonymous..."
You are a demanding mistress, Lily. But Rose very much deserved that! Well done.
Again, excellent description. An instant anatomy lesson for Lily! If a bit Discord-aided...
The Turnabout Tucking is nearly completed!
So this is where you first expressed an interest in breeding, in hindsight. I'm sad to say, I didn't pick up on it as cleanly before Temptations & Transformations, where you said you liked directly with regards to Night Owl and Package Handler.
This is what you call Deux ex Discordia. Which is fine, btw. His being here means you can do anything with anyone and chalk it up to his chaos magic and corruptive effects. That's the beauty of a story like this; it enables you explore relationshps, pairings and topics you couldn't otherwise, at least not without being ridiculously OOC. But here? With personalities and other attributes turned on their heads but still drawing on base desires, it works perfectly.
End part 3.
Lucky filly!
Of course, it would take an earth pony to be able to withstand such an assault and keep going without dropping half-dead of exhaustion. Score one more for the Earth Ponies!
Aw... well, it's kind of some of the folks on Nightmare Night who want the villains the win. Take is as a compliment that we kind of want things to remain as they are under Discord's influence! But then again, we get to see the aftermath as bodies and personalities are restored, which results in more storytelling opportunities. Such as:
If it makes you feel any better, Lily, Coyote ugly she isn't.
Despite her wishes, Lily opened her eyes and beheld her uncorrupted love’s equally tangled and shabby pink and red mane and cream coat, a smile on her beautiful face. She was still sleeping soundly, and thus Lily did the first thing that came naturally to her.
Another classic paragraph. Lily, doing what she does best!
"Quick! Before we're tempted to rut again!"
Pinkie has parties. Daisy has plants. But Daisy had the far better party here!
Only the dead, or Discord. He found it all quite fun and soothing. Now, now, Rose, someday you'll look back on this all and laugh. Probably while you're lying in bed with Lily again.
They both have PTSD--Post-Traumatic Sex Disorder. Sadly, there is no cure except to try to dampen the symptoms with more sex!
Tucked by a may? You mean by a mare?
I'd change that to "Looking strangely evasive." And I'd love to see Twilight's reaction to what she actually did to do it.
Poor filly. It's a lot to take in. Will she just try blaming discord for it all, or will she accept that there was actually something there he just brought out with minimal corruptive influence? Ditto with Daisy, who will probably be the only one of the three to fine with all of it. She saved the plant, and that's all she cares about, though getting tucked by it sixty ways from Sunday was certainly a bonus!
Their loss! Your gain...
Daisy approached the front door to the house, thinking the first thing she was going to do was get something to drink. I wonder what’s up with those two mares anyway? Finding the door unlocked, she walked inside...
So she's not disturbed by her own mess, but by the one they left? Or just the evidence of all their rutting? The smells and the wreckage in the living room?
Well, maybe she'll just borrow a page from Lily and decide that fire is the only answer!
Still an excellent story, however many years on! It earned its likes and I'm just sorry it didn't catch on more quickly. But, here you are--a four-part longpost on it! Hopefully a little something to soothe your pains when you get home tomorrow. Hope you like!
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I had to make this one-shot as long and thick as possible to do the Flower Trio justice.
It's a quarter after one, I'm a little drunk and I need clop now.
And yet she isn't a stallion. We're going to have to call a specialist to fix that.
Rather, she'd never admit to noticing. That's Lily's big issue really; she can't just come out and admit her feelings because the last time she did with a gal she was interested in, she wound up getting hurt and turning into an incel.
I came up with the name AJ_Aficionado on the spot when I was registering for the site. A lot of bronies have a ponysona they adopt and name themselves after it but I never really understood the concept. To me, a pony is a better version of ourselves and to become a pony while still retaining our nature is an insult to everything Equestria stands for. I've always been a bit negative on people, something I share in common with Lily Valley, I suppose.
But I digress. The name comes from the fact that during my initial binge-watch of MLP during the Spring of 2014, I found I just generally liked Applejack better than the other ponies because of sexy trad-pone personality and reassuring strength and dependability. There are few people in this world you can count on to really be there for you and Applejack to me is that woman; the kind of woman you take home to Mama; the kind of woman you put a ring on and consider yourself the luckiest man alive...
Which is pretty fucking ironic because when it came time for me to write an OC-version of a background pony, I made her the exact opposite of that.
After what happens in this story, you better believe Roseluck isn't daring to close her eyes around Lily.
It's funny to imagine but there is likely a pecking order among ponies about who is more beautiful even though I think they're all beautiful.
Well, he is a national treasure!
Well someone's doing the breeding, Don! It's not 2019 yet so Zebras aren't doing it. Futanari is the only answer!
Tempting fate is dangerous. Tempting Discord is far worse. Tempting the Killing Joke in Fallout Equestria is the worst. Possible. Thing!
Show, don't tell. It's one of the fundamental truths of good writing.
Glad someone's got their eyes open! Yeah, I loved that scene. A Gentleman's Price has a scene ripped from a movie too but someone managed to pick up that reference.
Can you believe there are critics that hated the Budd and Larry scene? They said it hurt the pacing of the story. As if there was any pacing in either of these two movies. Streamlined editing is for pussies!
There is MLP fanfic about the Coronavirus now. I can't bring myself to read about the thing threatening to wipe us all out having to work in a grocery store around so many germ-filled people. The curse in Nightmare Night has the potential to be far worse as it possesses sapience and can subvert powerful creatures, like something out of a DC comic. Rest assured if either virus comes to Equestria, the Trio are barricading inside their home and eating all the flowers.
I can't wait to watch the Season 2 finale with you again. I loved all the action stuff in S2.
I look forward to a tribute version if the Tentaculous! Actually, I've seen more recent clopfics actually use that name for their own tentacle hentai. It's good to be noticed!
I like the think the time I spent building to the inevitable conclusion — and the friends made along the way! — made all the difference for the readers.
Raze this barn! Or is it Racist Barn?
The guys who made Pony Waifu Sim actually added elements of Golden Oaks Library when designing the interior of the Castle of Sparkly Horror meaning that at least here, we get to hold on to our roots — pun shamelessly intended.
Thankfully, it's very unlikely Corona-Chan will notch a kill count that high. Spanish Flu was so deadly because it spread across the trenches of WW1 Europe, meaning an insanely-fast runaway ramp up in infections followed by lack of infrastructure and nutritious food. On the other hand, Coronavirus has the benefit of globalist integration, meaning a far larger area to quarantine. I'm just thankful that no matter what, I have a job because my job is keeping people from starving to death.
How does this thing still have errors in it? Ugh! Fixed.
How many thestrals did you sleep with last night, Rose!?
Yes.
In a different time, Celly may have had them executed!
You didn't scrimp on the details! I really appreciate the time you spent into making this so fun to reply to! I may have to do the other three later though. I'm very tired after a poor night's sleep and getting anesthetized the day after. I hope my reply made it worth it for you!
Dating is a very inelegant art in a cynical consumer-driven time. I've been on two in my life and both of them sucked. The second one sucked so hard I took an eternal vow of celibacy. Dating is for the young.
Thanks! In this particular instance, I was writing what I know which is like cheating only you're allowed to do it.
If Fertile Ground is semi-canon to A Gentleman's Price which is a Gentlemanverse Story, this means Blueblood is actually kind of fun to hang with, as long as you're not a feminist!
Totally! Rose has quite a few awesome lesbian clopfics out there. I recommend Full Bloom without hesitation if Fooler Rose is something you'd like to see more of.
You and me both.
I like to think of Nightmare Night as the perfected long-form version of Fertile Ground. This is what FG had in it with more plot and tons more effort put into it.
As you say, I had just discovered tentacles and futa, though only the latter I found titillating. I wanted to do tentacles purely for artistic sake.
I sexually identify as a Tyrannosaur.
This is the part of Fertile Ground that makes it my best work in terms of fetish clop. It's show-accurate enough to be plausible while delivering on the goods.
That was of those descriptions that in a normal story would have been trimmed but for the sake of clop are necessary enough to stay in. You got to make sure you're on the level with fetish fuel.
Royal privilege is an ugly thing. Save some bat dick for the rest of us!
Thanks!
I think I was going for "oh sugar honey ice teaaa!" or whatever it was Phoenix said in TS. Though this surprise was much less pleasant.
I never had that happen before for which I'm thankful!
That's a good point and an angle I hadn't considered.
** I move away from the keyboard to breathe in
Feels good man!
I've seen other cloppers do it but it's so rare to see it as a focus that it doesn't have its own fetish group. I've considered making a group just for it but who would add stories to it? Weirdly on a website that has necrophilia, straight-up violent rape and torture, making a group with flagrant ear-licking in it seems a bridge too far. Maybe earplay is just too small a story element to be considered its own thing and is merely an ingredient in a basic, vanilla recipe. It could also be that earplay falls under standard horse behavior in people's minds because... well... it is.
If I did make an earplay group, I'd have to differentiate between basic horse behavior and deliberately writing in ponies with large, pointy ears which is something you'd more likely expect in a universe that has elves in it or something. It'd be yet another dead group if formed, I'm sure.
Alas, when I did write in a sexually-aggressive Roseluck, I wound up canceling the story after the first chapter. It is true she's told people that's how she is but you never really get to see it play out in any of the stories I've finished.
I'm not surprised. That was one of your edits!
Let's not discount the refreshing taste of strawberry though!
Aromaphilia, a minor fetish but a good one. It's casually thrown into Gentleman For Mares of all places but inexplicably I never mentioned it in A Gentleman's Price. Like most of my memorable qualities, it came from this very story.
We do actually get to see Roseluck achieve alicorn status in Foolers Rush In. Sadly, Earthmother didn't make it that far.
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What can I say? Rose is quite an interesting character. I just wish I could have that dream where I have sex with her again.
Thin ones, thick ones, all different sizes for her pleasure!
Hummus is reasonable and goes great on snacks.
The Denim_Blue curse got ya!
If I've learned anything about Grannie Smith from Nightmare Night it's that she's got wood.
Made sense from a mythological standpoint and explains how earth ponies are constantly using magic and yet you can't see it. I also shamelessly stole from Blue Print, author of this gem.
I don't get it either. The hoofplay used here is tied to Daisy's essence as a magical creature rather than the anatomy, a sort of fetish-lite.
Thanks! I didn't want to remove the camera away from the demolition work going on around her and that was my compromise.
Once she got past her being a griffon, yes.
I initially had some reservations about having Daisy's experience being so far removed from Roseluck's and Lily's. If it wasn't for the scene with Discord snapping his fingers, you'd think Daisy had planned for this all along. When I saw what I had, it felt right. Daisy really loves her plant and given the right prodding (and poking and penetrating...) I think she'd have gone along with it without Discord's corrupting influence.
Ya gotta admit, a rut like that is pretty much impossible to beat unless you're an extremely accomplished unicorn/alicorn.
This was one of your additions. It's great!
There was definitely some cheating here!
Too bad it wasn't accidental anal.
A lot of things had only begun to express themselves in Fertile Ground like pregnancy. You'll notice that after Fertile Ground babies became much more of a focus of my work. It's a shame pregnancy wasn't explicitly mentioned here but there's always the possibility of a bonus chapter!
From an engineering perspective this is simply my finest work which is why I wanted to have you longpost for it. I've not been disappointed. Your input has been great at putting into words what worked about Fertile Ground.
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It is nice to work with canon even when I don't always appreciate what's put into the universe.
If I have a regret about Fertile Ground it's that the story ended on status quo. I chalk up the existence of Foolers Rush In entirely to Lily and Rose not being able to move forward after what happened. Then again, technically... they did — in A Gentleman's Price. This was a trick of sorts I employed in Fallout Equestria: TAoO by offloading the backstory onto a different story for the purpose of writing my own resolution to my own OCs.
Fertile Ground needs another chapter.
I thought the idea of Lily falling out of bed and then continuing on like it was nothing was quintessential Lily. It also immediately dispels the question in the reader's mind as to whether or not she was wounded in the fall. When Denim_Blue is prereading your story, that's one of the misconceptions you want to prevent! He's got a dark sense of humor at times.
If nothing else, your comment makes me wish this story had two chapters. I want to watch those two have purely consensual sex.
Pinkie Pie has a few tentacle fetish clopfics to her name. I think the two of them would get along well.
Whether or not I write a second chapter to this you can rest assured that Lily and Rose are a thing and have at least five foals with each other. Lily is getting as much productivity as she can out of Rose Pone.
This is terrible, Rose! We had sex and neither of us consented to it!
I know! If I gotta be honest though, that was one of the best lays I've ever had! My body is still shaking!
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Again?
Cadance, yes!
I was trying to convey an interruption phonetically instead of precisely by the letter. It lead to confusion in this instance and has been changed.
Twilight Sparkle has slowly gained a trickle of lines over the years as I've edited this work. Perhaps a future chapter could address this.
At the time this was written I'd never even considered this as I considered the follow-through on AGP to be canon to this. It's only now in the distant future I really want to see this alternate universe added to.
To Daisy, what she'd done was beautiful and natural and productive of good. What Rose and Lily did was done all over the furniture she'd paid for. Not a good look, girls! In time she'll get over it and so will Rose and Lily. I predict a very good end for them.
Thank you so much for your longpost! You put a lot of effort into it and it caught a few very big mistakes which I've corrected. As for my pains, I've upped my dose of acid-suppressors and that's done the trick for now. I would like to reduce or even remove my dependence on them someday. It's just a sad fact that once a stomach starts overproducing acid, it can get stuck on that setting and there's no real cure. At the very least I don't have anything life-threatening for now. I look forward to my next prereading assignment. Into The Storm is looking magnificent!
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Your wish was granted, Past Aficionado.
Uhh, it says update, but the latest chapter was 5 years ago?
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The last chapter used to be the story's only chapter. The entire story has been edited, adding thousands of words since its inception, and split into pieces to make things easier for people to read.
See the Author's Note.
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Ah, I see. Just got a bit confused. Stil, nice work!
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Thanks bro!
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You're welcome! Riseluck's my favorite of the flower ponies and I think you do great work with her
Pretty much.
I'll say this: She isn't wrong.
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I appreciate your comments.
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Well, I appreciate your story, so we're even.
This is a real nice start ^^
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Heck yeah, man! Glad you're liking it so far.
I like that.
She has a point.
She has a point too
That said I would say kill it with fire
Was he actually trying to help?
Only because Pinkie Pie isn't on it