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theultimatelosser


Comments ( 69 )

This is for sure a trollfic.

Terrible trollfic. A good trollfic is subtle; the reader shouldn't realize it until they think about it.

Try harder next time.

Sex. Gore. Pathetic grammar in the description and the title.
lol downvote didn't read

Did not read because the description was horrible. Please learn to spell, and use proper grammar.

Didn't read, downvoted.

Good trolls are supposed to reel you in.

I thought it was pretty good actually.

Can't even understand it.

Luz

amazing and taht u should all like and favrite it for it will be the best story on fimfiction

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I thought this was great. To laugh at.

1241395 Wait a minute, you could understand it?

I lost it at "i gueess ic an manage thought its tighter than some of the things rarity makes me waer when shes drunk."

DAMMIT FIMFICTION! Why can't I downvote for the rest of my life!?

*clicks on dislike button for an hour*

Owwie. My finger. :fluttershyouch:

OMG U GUD RITR! I VUT 5 STRZ ON IT! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

WTF is it recently with the poorly spelled trollfics?

1242049 No, he is Pony Ambassador for grammar and formatting.
Fear him.

You're extremely full of yourself. :derpyderp1: I realize you're a troll, but you've gotta realize that at some point, it isn't even funny anymore. It's just plain pathetic. :ajbemused:

Trolls are more subtle but you can easily pick up that you're trying to troll. Try harder.

And... it wouldn't hurt to use a spell check. Ugh. :facehoof:

Oh god no. Just... no! You know what you did wrong!

See, attempts at trollig like THIS are the reasons the aliens fly by, but never land. i can usually find SOMETHING positive about anything i read, but... i don't even know what i just read...:derpyderp2: this counts as a life-fail.

>> DJ Blitz i think all computer kerboards should come equipped with that button

What a waste of talents, time and brains... if any were put into ti's.

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dis is da besht thiing i hav evur seen yesh
dee grammer is absholutlee amashing mmmhmmm :derpytongue2:
i gives it six scootalooz out of five :scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:
(Sorry, you really need to get a proofreader, I'd recommend checking out this group, they'll be able to help you.)

... I saw that the first letter wasn't an uppercase T then left

scootallo then pointed one the other pupils being shanked by a ginka who looked like he hadent showered in years and that he was the lowest scum on equestria what are u going to do about that
flintpof showed real fear as he looke dat this red hair twwat fucking noighting thats aden smith if i try to do anything he fucking spread me
hearing thosde words come from this short fat ugly man was quite fitting as he was the sort of man taht looked


I came.

The review train has - (reads comments) - flown right through this station without looking back. :pinkiesick:

i think it is amazing and taht u should all like and favrite it for it will be the best story on fimfiction

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I didn't understand the story description... it's like a jumbled block of random words. For just a moment, I kinda thought I might be playing boggle

1241395

That statement works with your avatar pic in a way that's almost too awesome to comprehend.

Following the investigations of a here unnamed Inquisitor, the Most Holy Inquisition of Literature hereby judge this abomination to be heretical against the God-Emperor.

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Requesting Exterminatus.

...

Granted.

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Tried to read it. TRIED.

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If this was a trolling attempt, then it's not very good. If it's a serious fic, it sucked, learn to English. Make something legible, and I'll leave a longer review.
Whoosh!

COLOSSAL FAIL PLANE INBOUNT
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NYYYEEEEEOOOWRRRR
(Let's make this the new CHOO CHOO)

Yes! Brilliant! Laughing so much! I love it! :rainbowlaugh: :yay:

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