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Pascoite


I'm older than your average brony, but then I've always enjoyed cartoons. I'm an experienced reviewer, EqD pre-reader, and occasional author.

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Apple Bloom and I shared an unusual attitude about our mothers, and it helped to talk about it. But eventually she didn’t need her old friend Derpy anymore.

I didn’t think it would hurt this much.


An entry in the May 2021 Pairing Contest of the Original Pairings group.

Featured on Equestria Daily.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Weren't nothin sad about this one at all.

Nope. Nosiree. Any appearances to the contrary are obviously vile slander against my person.

I hope Dinky has no regrets, hate for the cycle to be repeated. This story had so much great imagery! Definitely not a pairing I've seen explored before but it shows that the bonds of friendship can come from anywhere and I'm glad they had each other.

I made the mistake of listening to this with Fall of Fall ~ Autumnal Waterfall in my ears. And while it was raining. And under an amazingly inconsistent ceiling fan.

It was the best experience of my life. Th an ks.

PresentPerfect
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That was a hell of a twist in the middle. o.o Thought I was losing my mind for a second!

What the heck. ;_;

Like Present, the twist in the middle/latter-third made me seriously question the structure of this, but wow did you make it work. There's a huge conceit in Derpy having the agency that she does, being actually dead but without it you have no story... And what a story!

This story hit me real hard. What a story.

It took me a little while to work out what was going on, but it made sense when everything fell into place.

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