Quill, a story telling minstrel. Set in stone for five hundred years, his good name taken. Set free by accident by the crusaders now journeys forth on with his great descendant Trixie. What things await this duo as they try to find the pieces of the weapon that destroyed the Crystal Kingdom, as he tries to restore the name of Quill to its former glory.
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I love this. Very interesting concept and I can't wait to see where you take this from here.
Very interesting indeed. And if the CMC seem to be able to awaken statues with their arguments, why aren't they banned from the gardens?
favorited.
I have been waiting for a fic about this come out. Please, do go on.
I always dig these stone statue stories (and will take suggestions on more to read if anyone has them), usually prove to be very good rides. Nice call on the CMC, as well, it's usually Twilight who uses magic to free the statue. Just a few grammar errors here and there as I pointed out above, nothing another passthrough can't fix. I would recommend toning down the overly verbose descriptions in the narration, though. There are several sentences in this chapter that don't make a lot of sense, and a few sentence fragments as well. You seem to have a solid grasp of what you want, you don't need to try so hard with the flowery language, it feels like you're trying to put square pegs in round holes much of the time.
You have my attention good sir...
You have just combined two things I like and did so in a very.... Fashionable fashion. I shall now demand MOAR!
i like ver nice
yay now luna has somepony to speak in that old voice again what ever its called
also .... i now love that song
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Can't wait until next chapter
this is good
cant wait for shit to hit the fan
celestia is in for a hell of a wake up call>>1266243
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Not one, but TWO "birthing hips" jokes? Oy vey, was there a two-for-one special on tickets for the cliché express?
1267964 ^_^ I wanted one but when my editor said i should comment on miss cheerilee i was like "Yah!"
1267106 How do i spend Luna Points?
1266375 Yah but i need to work on my old English, i think i got a few of my thy, thee, thou, mixed up.
"Lest your womb would shrivel up and die"
Mighty Quill, now proclaimed an advocate and an example to pedophiles everywhere!
Are thoust referring to thy season 3 of MLP?
Also another leading chapter. can't wait to see where this goes but I feel that the character should show ALOT more hatred towards Celestia, I mean come on, what if you were trapped in stone that long, then were asked to help Celestia. I WOULD GO FUCKING NUTS AT HER <------- Good example there :P
i would of probably looked celestia in the eye and said
GO FUCK YOURSELF BITCH
*flips a table and walks out*
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Normally i would agree, but he thought he got his plot kicked by slipping on some grass, i had to rewrite that scene seven times. Nothing seemed to work right. I will be putting lots of back ground details for his distrain for princess Celestia. Also the reason why i thought violence didn't make any sense because well he is cant fight and he is in the dead center of a castle. Quill is very intelligent, He knows full well he would die if he tried anything.
But Yes, i Did reference season three of MLP, get a jump on the competition if you will.
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Yes i though of saying that too, had it written and everything, but then the story wouldn't be estimated 150-200k words and although it is a happy ending this story would then die in the pages of the world never living up to his full potential.
Also, you two are forgetting the you tube video. He forgave her in it. So he has a compassionate heart. This line in the video struck a hude cord in me. So such so i even put it as the caption under the photo in the protologe.
As a writer i cant make him go out of character just for fun, no pony was a mane chariter like that. You cant fall in love with that.
Mighty Quill A story teller that defends and hold truth first, and forgives those who scorn him.
This is what made me fall for this character.
On a up those though, he told her to kiss his ass and spit tea in her face, and got away with it.
This story became dead to me at the last word of this chapter.
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>.> NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
1292836 She's too much of a bitch to be a "good guy" but not powerful enough to be a worth while villain if you get what I'm saying
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Hmmm Well you will just have to keep reading to see what she will become the good guy the bad guy or something more
1293002 UuGGhHH FINE!
I'll play your silly little game...
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Dralen i wont lie your one of my favorite readers, don't tell the others that though they will get jealous
1293066 one of your favorite!
I wub woo too
I wonder what Blueblood would think if he knew he was related to Trixie... Or even Octavia. Oh the jokes that can be made!
I am loving this story and am glad that one of my favorite songs can get a story. I would have done it, but it would have been of a most greivous quality. I can also see that your editors/proof readers did an excellent job, so kudos to them!
LOL busted celly
luna quick! *passes brain bleach*
also king .... somthings telling me this story will get featured soon.... 0_o
ether that or im just too tired.... we shall see
Tis is GOLD!!
Also: I HAVE AN OCARINA!! What a coincidence. Tis is a very happy day indeed!
HAHA. Celly's enjoying her Confiscated Contraband~! *LOL*
PFFTTT HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH!
Delving into history now/ background, and I guess the two at the end (or at least one) will be a part of the main character?
Another successful chapter.
Do you have a pre reader? You might wanna get one... it just reads really odd to me. I read it and something just seems off. I can see a few common grammar mistakes, but that isn't what bugs me... I dunno... Still tracking it though.
my mind right now.....
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I read this through and I found Quill to be... odd. For all of his talk about truth and hating Celestia for 'lying', he doesn't seem to respect truth nor know its actual power.
I get the impression that he does not have the slightest idea of want he's asking for, what he's trying to do, what he has done, nor what consequences could come from his actions. And going on incomplete information when the source of it would probably be more than willing to share gives me the impression that his judgement... leaves a lot to be desired.
Of course, future developments could easily prove me wrong, but I feel like Quill is trying way too hard to play the victim here. Yes, he's going to get sympathy, but no more, I'm holding my reservations and am willing to exercise the right to smack him if his buffoonery gets out of hoof.
Great story! Let's see if the royal and magnificent Trixie can avoid the landmines long enough to make amends.
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