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Hope we see more of Spike and Luna together there.
p.s. Why no Sex-tag ?
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Thanks for noticing that lol.
nice work
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Thanks ❤️
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your welcome
very sexy but it needs a bit of work, specially if you keep repeating the names instead of saying "he/him" or "she/her"
Does need some proof reading to help it flow and deal with some pacing and grammar issues, but otherwise a fun read.
With some work this story could be extremely good. Could use more breaking up of paragraphs and conversational Dialogue and a good editor and this could be better.
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What’s the derpibooru number for the cover art?