This took forever, and I apologize.
Big thanks to Steel Resolve for friendship and mentoring
BIG BIG thanks for amazing proofreader Karrakaz
And thanks as well to my other pre-readers: Kylar116 and PinkiePieAndI

The Cloudsdale scene was originally ENTIRELY different, but it didn't fit the story and was deleted. If you want to read it anyway, I cut a bit from the end and made it into a one-shot: License To Fly

Commence read.

Wow....

That was a great chapter I do hope she can choose soon and I hope it all ends Happily Looking forward to the next chapter.

Stare on command? that wasn't in last time I went through it

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Really? Pretty sure I didn't edit anything in tye stare scene...

I know (or figure, anyway) that you've still got an AJ and a Twi chapter to go with this story, I'm just not sure how you plan on ending it. I do enjoy reading it though, so I'm just along for the ride, nevermind where it ends!
You. Saw. Nothing.

Magnificent. Your writing skill dazzle my mind.

NO! DO NOT MAKE RAINBOW CHOOSE ONE! That would be so tragic
Just let her have them all!

Glad this updated, was beginning to get withdrawal.

Def Leppard reference. INSTA-WIN

Whoa, allot a words.
Well, better get started. I'm never one to resist Flutterdash fic.

Upvote for this (and only this) Chapter.
Well done!

is it just me? or was fluttershy's stare not just assertive, but also....hypnotizing.....? I liked the whole inoculation scene, it just worked so perfectly, for both of them..,,dont make rainbow dash pick,...this is mlpfim, not the real world, she shouldn't have to pick, in the mlpfim universe, maybe her friends are GLAD that she loves them all enough to do...that... with them, not angry that she cant choose.

Hmm...is it just me, or this the first time Rainbow has directly lied about her situation instead of just being evasive?
Dammit, Rainbow...

Wow. That was intense, very soft an emotional.

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sidenote: This was excellent, very....passionate

This is the best chapter so far. The slow build up to the clop itself made it much more believable this time.

I'm curious, is this going to end with Rainbow Dash in a non-traditional relationship with multiple partners? While her feelings don't seem as strong for Rarity, she's now made promises to both Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy, and she seems to at least want to try to keep both of those.

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Just one complaint:

This is how this is supposed to be written. You have officially made a lot of authors look terrible by comparison.

Emotion > Sensation.

You bastard.

Looks like Luna wasn't the only one who learned something in those voice lessons...

Twilight makes 5 clones of rainbow -----> rainbow has sex with everypony -----> ??? -----> PROFIT!!!$$$ just kidding, but seriously mane 6 orgy with 5 other rainbow dashes... Just gonna give you sometime to process that and gather your brains from that explosion.

That was fuckin beautiful. BEAUTIFUL I TELL YA. Srsly, so gentle and kind and passionate and sweet and shit. Best mature scene involving Fluttershy I've ever read.

Cant wait for AJ and Twilight
Great chapter!

Was hot

Rarity and Pinkie are dead to me now....

This better become Flutterdash

FAV SHIP! YES! YES! YES!

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Hehehe. Oh I have fun toying with people like you who know what the happy ending is but don't know if they'll get it. Story is only half over... plenty of room for things to change...
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Yeah I typically avoid reference based humor, but after the last chapter, it was just too perfect. Also, I don't think anyone caught the little ICP gag Steel Resolve helped me write.
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Rainbow has a lot to learn still. She's developing chapter by chapter, and where her lessons on love and sex will take her only I know, but generally yes, one of her main battles is whether she can love everypony... or anypony...
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Rainbow is loyal, not honest. She's still a bit ashamed of herself for being a bit of a hussy, sooo yeah, she lies. It will come back to bite her in the flank though...
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You really think I'll reveal the ending? 90% of my fun is watching people guess where the story will go and what the characters will learn. Her relationships are maturing with each chapter, and it is affecting her judgment. Just how it will broaden the end of the story remains to be seen...
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Well, I love it if someone feels they've learned something from m
y work, but I'm far from perfect and have a lot of learning to do myself. The first draft of this chapter was simply terrible, and my own sexual metaphors while not cliche, do get a bit silly at times. Sex in literature is still new territory for me and it's probably best that I leave clop to the professionals, but sex serves a purpose in this plot so I struggle through my adverse feelings on the topic anyway.
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I can think of several that are better. Ribbons and Lace features great mature scenes with Fluttershy (although the Shy characterization is poor for most of the story), and DEFINITELY check out Bechdel's Law, which my good pal Steel Resolve co-writes. It's a bit more porn with plot whereas mine is plot with porn, but beautiful nonetheless.
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Glad you guys like Flutterdash, but I'm kinda working backwards through the popular RD pairings. Still gotta give AJ and Twi their shot in bed with her. Pegasi on Pegasi has it's own kinda beauty to it though

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lol, your pic is gone bro, 4chan leech image

because I used to do this too, upload a pic to 4chan so I could reference it here, I'll tell you the easy way around this

all you gotta do is go to imgur.com you dont need to make an account of anything, theres an upload button on the main page, just upload a file from your computer, click upload again, then itll be on a page with your pic, click on your pick, then youll be on a page with JUST your pic, right click and copy the address in the address bar, use that instead of the 4chan method, they wont put a imageleech thing because imgur doesnt mind being used this way

its as easy as 1 2 3

step 1
i.imgur.com/BAjVo.jpg

step 2
i.imgur.com/FeAHe.jpg

step 3
i.imgur.com/EsaWG.jpg

1535691 Dude, i'm so sorry, but is there any chance you can help me? I'd love to add that pic, the version without the textboxt to my pony pics folder (can never get enough), but... I went to ponyconfessions.tumblr.com and I couldnt find it anywhere. Any chance you could help me find the original pic? without the textbox?

1547654 Well, its the best I've read so far. Eh.

No, no, NO . I hate Flutterdash so, no.

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Yes, some of the metaphors are grating, but what you choose to focus on is far more significant than how you focus on it in this case.

If you want well written sex scenes which focus on all the worst things, you read Rarity's Generous Plan. This isn't the polar opposite, because your writing is still legitimately good, but focusing on the physical sensations over the emotions and relationship is something far too many do far too often.

1532087 D'awww, that's adorable!

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I will say that I'm hoping for a scene with Rainbow talking it out and being honest with Rarity and Fluttershy about her actions and feelings, once she's sure of them.

Unless the definition has changed since I learned french, an au pair is a foreigner, much like an exchange student, who works as a maid/nanny in exchange for room and board. Not sure how this relates to Dashie or Flutters while they are making out.

Just a friendly heads up.

"Is someone we know there?"

You have the "-pony" suffix in all the appropriate words except in this one and this one:

"And I'd much rather it be someone I know..."

Also missing the "-pony" suffix.

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In the base definition yes. It is also commonly used for it's literal definition, which translated to english is 'at the equal'. Rainbow and Fluttershy have been friends for such a long time, that Rainbow does see her differently that her other friends, while she is no less loyal to her friends either.
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D'oh. It's hard to be perfect for 30 pages hahaha. Especially with the pony lexicon. Thanks.

Gravity, gloss, glue, gossamer?

Wings? Icarus?

Are you going somewhere with that, or am I just seeing things?

This was such a good chapter.

It has all the things you would expect from a Fluttershy chapter in
a well written clop-fic. And then there is the fact that the scene is
very descriptive and sexy. Hot!

The only thing I can say other than that is that I am really curious
where this is all leading. Hopes for a generally happy ending, Colt Zero.

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There is an overall theme there, but it's more related to the poems and it's more fun if you figure it out. If it helps, I'll tell you that the remaing three chapters are titled Gold, Glow, and Gravity.

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No ending hints, although I will say I did not put a sad tag on the story. I've written some okay sad plotlines (although they turned out happy in the end), but I don't plan on this being an overall sad story. It is meant to induce feels, and does use some sad methods to do so, but only to drive the character development.
I have an idea how it will end, but I don't want to plan anything for certain until I reach that point.

I haven't actually read this yet.

Although, I did read the first chapter ages ago, and I loved it! Really happy to find that there's more of this.

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Sooo. You like AppleShy?

Bronydragon

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Yes. With all my shipping heart.

By Faust! The orgy in the last chapter will be epic!

Well, the premise is as silly as one would expect for a femslash polyamory fic, but you do write well.
On the other hand, a pegasus as athletic and injury prone as Dash having an intact hymen at her age is very unlikely. Also breaking it with feathers is... silly as fuck.
Should have just made her sensitive and "unadapted" to penetration, not an "intact" virgin.

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Feathers? The tip of a wing is a functional appendage.
But yes. Intact hymen in an athlete is silly, but I wanted to stretch things for the sake of Fluttershy being the one to take her virginity. It made for better story for me to have that first moment shared between old friends.
And anyway... if we want to go fully anatomical... I don't believe horses have hymens to beging with lol.

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Actually they do have hymens.
And technically, Shy popped her cherry, but did NOT take her virginity. Sex is sex whether the hymen is broken or penetration occurs or not.
And yes, while the wing is an appendage, the wing tip ends at the base of it's feathers, and the feathers at the tip stick out rather far, unless you mean she used the "wrist" joint of the back of the wing, where it folds in the middle?
But at least a horrible joke can be made: "That's one way to join the 'redwing' club."

I can already see the sequel to this "Rainbow Dash Fucks Equestria"
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I've said it before, and i'll say it again:
FLUTTERDASH IS THE OTP!!!!
This is your best one yet. I was worried about how you were going to make this one work, but you did it, and you did it beautifully.
Although the sequence in Pinkie's bedroom could use some work. Pinkie seemed really out of character for a lot of it. Rainbow too.
Plus the language in the intro seemed a little too flowery. A little less poeticism and a little more simple storytelling would help it a lot.
The rest of the chapter is FABULOUS.
Side note: I see what you did there. "Bucking magic, how does that work?" You get moustache for good reference.

if you don't mind, i was just wondering when youthink you'll be able to update?

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Sometime in the next two to three weeks. I've written about half of the next chapter, but I'm currently slammed at work and have hardly had time to write at length.

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that's understandable. thanks for takeing time to answer my question