What will we leave behind for those we love?
Will those closest to us know when we're gone?
Do our pets know we're not coming home?
Applejack has left something behind for Twilight, but does she know what to do with it?
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Midwest Brony. Really appreciate critiques, especially if you catch grammatical errors. I'm far more used to prose and poetry than narrative, so any advice, hate mail, etc. is appreciated.
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Big thanks to my friend Cerko for making the awesome cover!
Thanks to my pre-readers, CircaCloud9 and HenryAnthonyCourtler
Poor Twilight, poor dog. I like it, there's not enough Applelight stories out there you know.
Also, how do you report reviews? Because somepony's being a spammer.
edit: never mind, it's gone now.
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE WINNONA ALL ALONE, APPLEJACK?! WHY!?
peter gabriels book of love was on the raido while i was reading the i love you part of the letter it made me bawwled my eyes out
happy this wasn't appledash. finally a applelight fic :3 so sad
i'm going to hate this but...
Twilight: i never ask for this....
damn that game XD
I quite like the cover.
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especially Winona
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What happened to applejack? I quite like stories like this because of the ponies emotions behind this, but I always ask the same question "What happened?" anyways, liked this story especially because it's a twijack :)
I'm speechless:
The sadness was brought with applejack leaving twilight, then it was made worse with the passing if winona, i would have been happy if they at least kept the memory of applejack alive with winona but causing twilight to lose everything from the pony she loved the heart was broken and the tears flowed
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I knew someone would ask, but the reason I left those details out is that they're not relevant to the story at hand. She is gone, and the story is about what effect that has on those around her.
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I deleted it. Always happens when I first post. Those spammers flock to me.
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Letting Winona die was something I debated about for a while, but yeah. We can't be sure whether or not Twilight is able to face the loss that she's been dealt, but her mixed emotions and the loss of Winona offer a little insight into where she is at and what she's learned.
1110862 That sucks. I wish people'd stop doing stuff like that. Besides, I sincerely doubt anyone would follow the link they post.
Why did you have to write this?
The feels! I'm sad now....
A nice little read, even if it is one of the saddest ones I've come across. Great Job!
You... absolute... magnificent....
....!
That was just... tragically perfect. ...and I love it.
2096712 c'mere *cries into your shoulder*