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Huh. Interesting way of putting this story. I like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Huh. Interesting.
As a man of pride, I can easily empathize with Luna's point of view, that her superior intellect makes it so that only one question is necessary. She can infer and deduce enough information on her own, and for someone, even her older sister, to act as though that one question is not enough is to condescend Luna. Your personal theory as to the source of Luna's discontent, hmm? Because arrogance is a source of all kinds of strife, and I speak from experience
Simple and well done.
My only issue is that these sort of things usually come with super helpful tutorial pamphlets, which I always scan, and never find anything I didn't already know. However, Luna should probably get one or five of those.
Totally doesn't mean I didn't love this story, and the way you played the diarchs' dynamics.
Wow. So much character development in such short a story. And the premise was so deceptively simple, too! Amit, you do the darndest things.
I'm wondering why it is that I never received a notification about this story having been posted... Well, it was a great one, at any rate. Short, bittersweet, and to the point.
Luna + Equestria's equivalent of Wikipedia (with all those wonderful biassed editors) = recipe for chaos. If I were Celestia, I'd send Luna to talk to Twilight, who I bet could explain everything to her. Of course, that's dangerously close to "Lulu, I'm busy; why don't you go out to play with your friends?" but Celestia has already gone a lot further in patronising her sister in this story.
Ah, poor, poor Luna. Perhaps she should examine a language arts book first.
Cute little story, and a wonderful play on the two opposing wills.
Things like Google are not so much asking a question as they are asking the answer.
Great story. But I'm sure Fimfiction can handle simple diacritics better than that...
For some arcane reason, I cannot help but read Luna as an indignant Frenchman. One that would carry a baguette and one of those really thin moustaches.
5343431 oui
celstia being a bit rude