Lol, RIP to the cover art

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I'm talking with an Admin on better censorship. It'll be back up shortly.

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The story keeps mentioning specifically that the sirens stay tight no matter how much sex they have but... that's kinda just how vaginas work?

That little point aside, this was enjoyable ^^
I appreciate it hitting that manga-style tone, and the three girls all having their own unique personalities.

The very end part was way too indulgent and a bit forced, though, if you ask me. Though I'm sure other readers might appreciate it.

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That's probably the best review I'll get :P

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This was good and you should feel good about it.

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Thanks ^_^

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Is this not the exact same censor but instead of hard black lines it's soft white clouds lol?

A manga-inspired story?Sauce Please!

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Sauce Please?

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So when exactly will volume 2 come out?

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Once I’m done with it :P
Periodic updates are given in the group forum. You’ll just have to check on occasion as no notifications are given to comments in the forums.

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Oh, ok 👌

Why did Uotapo make the Dazzling's breasts so small? I always assumed they'd be bustier then that.

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Because they have no breasts in Equestria Girls and I believe it's because they are born sirens which are serpents which don't have boobs. Hence, why I made them flat in this series.