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Pretty solid finale.
And I already have a third part in mind if I could send it.
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sure, id love to hear it
Well, this is at least more detail and care taken in the writing than the prequel. It’s still incredibly fast-paced, though. Still could benefit from slowing down and describing things in more detail, not to mention a bit of warmup and foreplay.
Still, it’s got the benefits of the prequel too. A simple clopfic that gets right down to business and immediately delivers on what it promised.