Milky’s kingdom

by MelodyStories

The destroyed world

Today was the day. We all wore dresses. We also forced discord to come. 52 ponies were there. 94 of them didn’t come so we banished them to another planet. All the ponies cheered when me and my husband kissed. Cookiemilk put the crown on my head and said

“YOUR NEW QUEEN!” All the ponies clapped. My kid loop fruit yelled

“YOU CAN NOW EAT CEREAL!” All the ponies clapped and cheered and screamed and wooed. They loved us.

Then all of a sudden the ground started shaking. Then the cookie trees started falling. Every pony screamed and ran away. Then a giant centaur named nightmare Tirek came and ate a tree. He then smashed a pony. I didn’t care. The kingdom was at risk! I blasted Tireks eye. He fell to the ground. Sadly, he was so big, he destroyed the whole kingdom when he fell. I screamed with sadness.

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” I got so mad I blasted Nightmare Tirek and he turned into a cloud and went into the sky with the others. I cried and farted and screamed and moaned and yelled and made puppy eyes and weeped and wailed and whined and bawled and sobbed and whimpered. I couldn’t believe it! The kingdom that was around all these years, is GONE!

I whimpered sadly. Then I looked at the kingdom. I decided to remake it. Instead of cookies, it will be milkland! I decided to go back to the castle and build. I made 100 gallons of milk. I asked my kids what I should do.

Loop fruit said, “Call it loop’s world! Turn the water rivers into milk!”

I did her idea. I started pouring milk in the holes nightmare Tirek made. The creamy white delicious ice cold milk went all over the wet hole. Then, it was fully covered and we made a milk lake.
There was all types of milk. Almond, Strawberry, Chocolate, Vanilla, and more!
We can save the kingdom!

Comments

[BezierBallad]

And so it continues.

[The Blue EM2]

10748444
Here we go again!

[MelodyStories]

10748444
This series will be 10 stories long and I will next make a story about pinkie pie becoming an alicorn

[TheMajorTechie]

👁👄👁
we have been blessed with another horseword compilation

[The Blue EM2]

10748450
Prepare thyself for an utterly chaotic comments section!

[BezierBallad]

10748448
Pinkie becoming an alicorn is a more readable concept than this.

[Thunderpop]

10748454
Agreed

[MelodyStories]

Also the kingdom is now the milk kingdom

[BezierBallad]

10748463
Perfect... Does that mean anyone who drinks apple cider is thrown in Tartarus or something?

[Scampy]

YES, MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED WITH MORE RAINBOWMAGIC FICS

[The Blue EM2]

10748465
The love it?

[MelodyStories]

10748469
Yess

Spoiler:

When loop fruit and her kid toucan rule, apple cider will be allowed

[MelodyStories]

10748473
Tysm!

[Scampy]

10748477
You should consider writing something for this :o

Every story submitted is another $20 donated to LGBTQ+ charities and honestly we'd be privileged to have such an esteemed and talented author participate 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

[MelodyStories]

10748481
YAY

[Thunderpop]

The creamy white delicious ice cold milk went all over the wet hole.

I don’t like how you worded that.

[MelodyStories]

10748479
Grr

[MelodyStories]

10748474
Yeah they love it :D

[The Blue EM2]

10748491
Right.

[Ice Star]

10748463
What happens to the lactose intolerant in this kingdom?

[MelodyStories]

10748507
They had a spell on them and they are not anymoar

[BezierBallad]

10748512
So they can cure lactose intolerance but not food allergies?

Yeah, how does that work again?

[MelodyStories]

10748514
Only Cookieheart can cure allergies she’s dead though

[Thunderpop]

10748476
Why is her kid named toucan of all names

[BezierBallad]

10748519
So why not have Cookieheart cure allergies when she was alive?

[MelodyStories]

10748533
Because she allowed milk and cookies

[Thunderpop]

10748549
That makes no sense...

[MelodyStories]

10748557
15

[RoyalBardofCanterlot]

10748561
Ah, I see. Don't let the downvotes get you down, but this story may need to be run through an editor though it is an interesting premise.

[MelodyStories]

10748770
The farts are for people that get sad from reading

[BezierBallad]

10748778
Buddy, literally everyone gets sad just by reading crap like this.

[MelodyStories]

10748811
Yess because the cookie world was destroyed

[BezierBallad]

10748813
And not for that reason.

[Thunderpop]

10748813
Well “nightmare tirek” did us a favor by destroying the kingdom

[MelodyStories]

10748815
What’s sad about it?

[BezierBallad]

10748823
Everything else. The awful grammar, the poor characterization, the Mary Sue OC, the stinking concept.
10748821
Exactly! Thank you!

[MelodyStories]

10748826
What’s wrong with the concept??

[BezierBallad]

10748828
Well, actually, I mean, a Mary Sue cookie alicorn could’ve been a good parody story. And maybe, just maybe it had potential for an actually good fanfic, but this is not how you do it.

[MelodyStories]

10748834
This is a story about the cookie family. They are not marry sues because their flaws are crying

[BezierBallad]

10748837
But is it enough flaws for an actually decent character? You need to add more flaws that actually hinder their “perfection” and give them more difficult hardships that they’re not able to fix in like five minutes.

[MelodyStories]

10748840
And the families flaw is they can’t make discord act good

[BezierBallad]

10748846
Really? That’s the best you can do? Hardly anyone can do that as easily as Fluttershy.

[MelodyStories]

10748847
No I mean they can’t find a punishment that will make discord not make bad mistakes

[BezierBallad]

10748850
They found plenty of punishments alright. And they’re all for such minor incidents.

[MelodyStories]

10748851
Discord also threw their favorite cookie jar off a cliff

[BezierBallad]

10748855
...It’s a cookie jar.

[MelodyStories]

10748856
It was made out of a rare diamond and it was the last one in the world

[BezierBallad]

10748858
Okay, you’re making this stuff up as you go...