• Member Since 29th Mar, 2021
  • offline last seen May 3rd

MelodyStories


My name is Melody and I’m 15 years old.

Latest Stories
7

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  • 1 week
    Criticism

    Tomorrow I will have a 1 month hiatus from writing stories so I can be better at it I’ll be back in June 1

    Can you please criticize my previous stories you can be as harsh as you like

    7 comments · 70 views
  • 1 week
    @LunaStories @OdenStories

    I unblocked you

    9 comments · 37 views
  • 2 weeks
    Crossover?

    Should my next crossover story be Mario, Invader Zim, Animal Crossing, Paw Patrol, Lps, Moomin, Harry Potter, My Hero Acadamia, How To Train Your Dragon, Talking Tom, Tomas the Tank Engine, Shelly and Sherb, Fnaf, Dora, Frozen, Flower Girls, PewDiePie, Mio and Mao, or Sonic?

    16 comments · 70 views
  • 3 weeks
    New stories coming out may 1st!

    Also new chapter coming out soon!

    5 comments · 67 views
  • 3 weeks
    Everything wrong with No magic flies

    Wind. That’s the only thing the lone Wonderbolt could feel.

    You can feel more than wind! You can feel coolth, warmth, etc!

    Sins: 1

    She continued flying until she found a nice cloud to rest on. She landed on the soft, bouncy cloud

    clouds aren’t bouncy!

    Sins: 2

    “Oh crap…” she said looking at her contrail. She knew that down below, her rainbow was spotted. She needed to hurry up, and recharge stamina. “Come on Dash, you can do it.”

    Read More

    54 comments · 220 views
May
3rd
2021

Criticism · 6:48pm May 3rd

Tomorrow I will have a 1 month hiatus from writing stories so I can be better at it I’ll be back in June 1

Can you please criticize my previous stories you can be as harsh as you like

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Welcome back kid, let's see what you got *send it to MelodyStory of the 1 month future*

Ok now you will start listening the advice, that will be a good start to you. Good luck for the road to write a really story.
P/S: you will be hear the harsh words from me a lot, i have no mercy :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This is all very avant-garde. Keep up the good work.

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ShiningBeacon

#3 · 5 minutes ago · · ·

Only way to improve is to keep writing.

says Shining Beacon, a fellow user of ours.

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