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Awwww, that was adorable.
Absolute Chad move
I was expecting the most legendary frying pan battle but to be fair Anon did the best he could with stainless steel. For the love of everything holy Anon better frame the pan in his room
Mothafucka threw a whole ass frying pan at her! I LOVE THIS GUY!
This is my first time commenting on this story. I've been silently reading every update & can I just say that I like this a lot.
It's even better given that I'm a visual kind of reader so with every word comes a picture in my head to go along with it (accurate voice acting included).
Fuck that bug bitch! How you gon lick her man like that in front of her?! Run them hooves now!
That worked out pretty legitimately for all of them. Celestia got her Big Damn Hero moment for Anon, Anon got to show his true feelings by unintentionally being a distraction, and Javelin and Raven are now an item. The only bad thing I can think of is all the pony blood on Luna, which I can't help but feel was added because I opened my mouth in the previous chapter. Sucks to be those Royal Guards.
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So nobody is gonna a say anything on how Anon single handle…kind of sort of defeat the rise of Daybraker with one single word?
That has to be THE most realistic and anticlimactic attempt at fighting Chrysalis I have ever seen from a human...and I'm loving every second of it.
Anyone else got a little worried the chapter was just the number? Kinda ominous.
Glad to see it wasn't exactly warranted.
At this point, that stainless steel frying pan is an important minor character in the story and I am loving every moment of this.
I swear only the funniest stories have at some point a a frying pan being used as a weapon
Yes! The Glorious Pan of Gloriousness got the important key moment here
Loved what you did with the frying pan
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I think he was hurt by the fact they lied about who they were and even when he suspected they denied the truth until they had to face their feelings. Yes he was a stubborn idiot who was being a big baby but at least it seems it will all work out.
11079525
Dodge a bullet there for everypony is what he did.
Thanks again C-W for another awesome chapter and a great conclusion to the wedding arc of the story. I loved all the dialog in this chapter and found it to be realistic to what characters like Chrysalis would say and act. I also loved the scene where Tia is showing a bit of her inner Day Breaker during her fight with Chrysalis, it was both kick ass and hot...... literally. lol. It was nice to see her throw off the wholesome and motherly persona and let lose her inner warlord, which was responsible for helping to unite ancient Equestria, and beat the absolute heck out of someone deserving it. I hope we get to see more of it again, perhaps a little pushing from Luna is needed to get Celestial to get back into training to again. I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
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Still I say is worth mention it, and boy are those 2 princesses sticking like glue now, also was that a Mad Max reference at the end?
Oh my Celestia, this was totally worth the wait. Excellent execution on the build up, and a really good job intertwining this story with the show Canon to make it feel organic too. A+ chapter.
Anon channeling his inner Peter Quill, I see.
Awwww Princesses wagging tails sounds heckin cute
if he doesn't hang that frying pan on a wall somewhere i'm going to be so disappointed.
Nice
11079529
It will soon be up there with Bench-kun and Truck-sama.
Huh....neat. Almost went Daybreaker there. Wonder if Luna had a Nightmare moment too.
Nice
HHNNNNNGGGG....!
This is amazing!!
Hell yeah! Anon and the princesses finally getting back together
Truthfully, it’s a fun story and I really enjoy it. But I think you really missed out on a lot during the 6 month time skip. That was a mistake and this story is too good for that. That was we’re all the realization of feelings and trials and tribulations should of taken place and it just got glossed over. Once the whole canterlot wedding “arc” got brought in the story became…predictable due to an event I’m going to assume almost every reader is already familiar with. We all knew where it was going where as before we were hooked and waiting in suspense. I know you said you didn’t want them to instantly forgive each other, which is good…but that’s kind of what ya did. You just typed “6 months later” before it. It still reads for us like they were instantly forgiven. I dunno that’s just my two cents and it seems the story is pretty much winding down now. The whole wedding/changling arc/chapters aren’t bad by any means…I just think we could of used more chapters about the three apart from each other and what they were going through before getting to this point. Still a great story and a fun read though. I just feel like it missed out on a lot for being as well written and good as it is. My recommendation…pause for the cause, get rid of the “6 months later” and give us some more good meat before getting here and then re-upload these chapters. As much as I like the regularly scheduled updates I think a break from it to add more in between would benefit this story greatly. I would rather not get an update for like a month but end up with like 4 or 5 more chapters about them apart and what they went through. How did the sisters handle it? How did Anon handle it? Did he try and date again but no pony would because of who he was? Was he not into it because no mare made him feel like the sisters did? How did he handle THAT? What happened to nobles and papers wondering about where he was? Did they have to randomly have to get together to keep up the cover story? What about Jav and Raven? So many things situations/drama/untouched. But that’s just my two cents. Still a great story and definitely still reading.
Just binged this whole thing. Awesome work, looking forward to the rest of the updates as they come!
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It's been forever since I watched Mad Max... Should probably rewatch it to remind myself.
adorable, look at all the feels
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It's chapter 34 you have to worry about. ;P
I think this is supposed to be 'maniacal'
Now I'm sure that's what you meant.
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I guess you could say Anon opened a...
...Pan of whoopass.
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It the scene when Max returned to the truck cover in blood and one of the girls tells 'it not his blood'
Y E S
Was hoping for more than one hit
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This is all full fair criticism, and I think the only reason I feel differently is that so many stories here suffer from a case of permanent pre-climax syndrome, and I'm just relievedthis one didn't.
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He better bronze that sucker.
That should be vicious.
11080029
Bronzing it would be un-needed seeing as the fact that its a Stainless Steel Frying pan.
Huh?
This is the end?
Next gonna be epilogue+clop i bet..
*Sigh* i want season 2 where chrysy try to steal anon but end up become part of his herd too..
*Sigh*
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I feel the same about the immediate (to the readers) change of heart. It doesn’t affect my enjoyment too much; just a roll of the eyes when anon says he missed them and cares about them. I know he could feel like this with the given time skip but it’s just hard for me to be in that mindset when it’s written similarly to being the next day.
But it’s a double edged sword. The time skip gets us to the moment we want to read while making it a little jarring to read but not doing a time skip would feel like a drag, making us wait for the moment we all know is inevitable; his forgiveness of them. There’s no definite way to do it; both ways will make the story hard to read for someone.
MVP of the round:
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Thought it was just a regular iron frying pan. Didn't see any indications they were capable of making stainless steel.
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Yeah I get that. I just feel though with how well written this is that the author is good enough to get us through it. Which is why I feel so short changed on it. There was no coming to terms with anything and we were just subjected to a predictable arc/reconciliation that we are all familiar with. It’s like I said it’s still good…I just would of liked to see more of what went on in the time apart instead of being subjected to “I hate you”…( 6 months later)…”I love you and miss you”. I think it just rubs me the wrong way because everything we’ve gotten up to this point has been solid gold and then we were just tossed a pice of copper for a climax.
LET'S FUCKIN GOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
When Anon used the frying pan for the first time, this is what came to mind: