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Celestia just diggin that hole
Yay! Finally! A story that tackles serious issues of rulling a kingdom like taxes, and the income and and trade system that Equestria has. I wonder how weight those their currency is worth compare to for example the Hypogriffin one.
They had a crisis and are just restoring so I imagine their coin is heavy, like the euro. Assuming Equestria has the same weight as the dollar I wonder if places like prance or the crystal empire have a mayor or minor weight on them.
OH! maybe Griffintown is consider a third rate nation on how their society isn't exactly as glorious as they used to be?
Also, Anon might have dig a hole but Celestia honey…you and Luna are about to reach the core of the planet at the pace you are going.
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Je vi lo que hiciste ahi.
And nah even if they are pretty drunk, I bet they would try to restrain themselves as much as possible
…y si no, Anon puede comprarse un latigo y una silla y mantenerlas a raya hasta que se calmen…o se tiren la una a la otra.
Nice
Celestia and Luna must have Some dwarven blood in them.
It’s only a matter of time until shit hits the fan
Celestia keeps digging. It's funny..but also sad.
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And soon to be hitting a Mega vein of Awkward and Drama!
Celestia literally has one job as Sunshine.
....Raven's gonna be pissed.
and like that .
the situation twist more tightly yikes .
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Looking at the cover art, I'm wondering if Raven will go Dark Side and lead the Angry Mob after Anon, when the two Sisters don't sort their own shit out.
Of course, just my speculation, lol.
<insert random offensive and pointless political comment here>
Also thanks for the update
And the plot thickens.....
And I ain't talking about Celestia and her cake fetish either hehe.....
But seriously, shits gonna hit the fan when Anon find out Sunshine and Nightshade don't technically exist.
Celestia is like a teenager right now. Pushing off responsibilities and digging her self a deeper hole every time.
I was wrong. This isn't a train wreck. It's a train ballet, but there is an asteroid about to hit the ballet school.
Also for some reason this part really caught my imagination:
This really got me thinking - If Zebras already give predators a hard time, can you imagine a lion trying to sneak up on a herd of 1000 technicolor kaleidoscope candy ponies? It would have an epileptic seizure and it's poor heart would just give out!! That's a defense against predation if ever there was one!!
No sé suponía que tenían que decirle que no podían ser algo más que amigos?
Pd: esto se puso bueno 😁😁😁😁😁
Celestia and Luna have dug themselves so deep in a hole that it be funny if I wasn’t so scared of what’s gonna happen when Anon inevitably finds out.
He's gonna be pissed when he find out. Isn't he?
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By then the holes gonna be so deep that Australian ponies are gonna come through.
Im sitting here hoping this anon is unusually perceptive and has caught on to the two of them having alter egos date him as well and he's playing along to see how long they will try to keep it going.
Break anon heart?
*Intensely warming up with my nunchuck*
A lot of people in the comments say that the relationship will blow up but from how the story is written I think that Anon will not get angry but just feel disappointed and Celestia and Luna will will try to win him back in a few chapters maybe
I'm going to use the "compliment sandwich." Here it goes:
It's fucking adorable how flustered Celestia and Luna are around Anon. It's really thoughtful that she got him a watch.
Be careful about being repetitive while authoring the story. You have used the phrase "that's an easy one," and "that's easy" when two different main characters are asked a question.
"How do you make an omelette?"
"Well, that's an easy one silly, you break a few eggs."
Both Anon and Celestia have used this phrase to answer questions about their respective histories. I chalked it up to character style in the last chapter for Anon. But when Celestia (Sunshine) turned the same phrase in this chapter, I noticed.
Is this nit picking? Maybe.
The history about the magic ley lines in a unicorn horn is awesome world building. Damn that was good. And in your author note, you mentioned more history in the next chapter? (Squeals with excitement) I can't wait!
So it was previously mentioned that Celestia's and Luna's disguises make them more hormonal or something. My bet is they're going to try and break up (again) in their disguises just as their heat hits, fuck him to oblivion, and (due to the heat) drop their disguises by accident.
Ugh, I'm so worried but I can't stop reading. You little tease of an author~
Oh no. Evidence.
I'll bet.
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I am a horse and I'm digging a hol-
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Right. That.
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They totally exist. It's just that he mainly knows them by another channel.
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As much as I would want that too, I don’t think that will be the case.
A brush that can "massage" the muscles? Right.
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MAGIC
Raven is coming across like she's had all the nobles personally yelling at her, rather than collating reports from other ponies to show to Celestia. She's not really in a customer-facing support position, and she's got a forty-hour-a-week job teaching Anonymous. This is throwing off her reactions and statements in my mind, there should be a lot of support staff in between the whiners and the decision makers.
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Sounds like Hitachi branched out into hair care products but couldn't leave their roots behind.
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I mean...they do in a way...
Because weren't Sunshine and Nightshade them pre-ascension?
So they do exist still technically.
🎼sweet home alabama🎼
Daaaaaammmmnnnn
Yes and no, they always complain even if he would be perfect, it's impossible to make everyone happy.
As if...
Awesome lore and world building. So Luna and Celestia are artists? Damn fine character building ♡
The answer to all... Magic
Sooo... Ponies are a bioengineering project?
Maybe Ponies etc are high end pets!
Over time the evolved and rebelled
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I hope so as well, that would be SO amazing but naah, we probably will go the boring predictable route…
Right...