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cute always gets a pass
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This whole thing is vaguely infuriating. Let the man process shit FFS.
i do hope anon is even more pissed when he finds out that its celestia
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Plot twist: it's not celestia,but a random pony that just happens to look like celestia's disguise.
Now we wait and see the real celestia walk in and Anon assume their twins.
...
Oh what if the first mare is actually Luna,disguised as her older sister
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na better twist would be that its cadence and in a few celestia will walk in and cause the twin confusion and then luna comes aswell
This won’t end well, I can feel it
Probably meant to say “hear”?
The only thing missing here is now that in the next chapter we find out Luna thought of the exact same idea, and Anon will be introduce to a cute blue pegasus, wanting to join the fun…and neither sister know about the other disguised.
Boy that would be a complete Freaky Friday right there jeje
Well this is either going one of two ways.
It will be a glorious fuck up
Or it will be a glorious... something. I'm not entirely sure what though.
amazing chapter. two routes one very more angry and depressed--- actually now looking at it probably nake it even worse. now then anything he may not even trust anypony anymore.
I knew your name looked so familiar! I love your "The Discovery" series!
This story is fantastic!
Ah yes, deception. THAT will get Anon to come around for sure.
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I'm sure this won't backfire in any possible way. Nope. Not at all!
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Next time, bolden the target of your correction. Just a bit of advice. I know I'm not the author, but I was looking for what you were correcting in the quoted blurb for almost a minute.
I get what Celestia is trying to do, but I still feel that this is wrong.
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Thank you! I'm really proud of that series. I'm glad you're liking this story too :)
That won't end well Celestia, shit like that usually blow up into your face... and the after taste isn't pretty.
Hmm. Best-case scenario as I see it: “Sunshine” really is Celestia, using her disguise purely to try to gauge how badly she’s screwed up exactly and what she can do to fix things and hoping that Anon will open up more easily to a friendly new face at a bar than he would to “the Princess”, allowing her to go about that more effectively in turn. It’d still be very much a deception, of course, but as long as she didn’t lead him on for long it could plausibly be construed as a mostly-white lie employed for reasonably good(-ish) purposes. Of course, the more manipulative her use of her disguise becomes, the angrier Anon will have perfectly good reason to be once he finally finds out...
I really look forward to the continuation of the story, thanks for the good mood, you are read from all over the world, even from Russia :)
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Why thank you! I actually know a few artists from Russia, and they're super nice. I always love when I hear that my work is appreciated in countries I'd love to visit :)
Sunbutt better be careful how she acts, if Anon figures that it is her in disguise he may go apeshit on her to the Nth degree.
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not just apeshit, he may very well go to prison for trying to strangle her to death or beating her with any of the nifty chairs at the bar
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What, No pulling out her feathers and turning them into a feather duster?
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You doubt what a person who is utterly pissed with nothing to lose will do lol
Javelin has an odd approach to helping people.
Whelp, saw this coming. It’s gonna go tits up quick and make Anon hate them even more got not letting him have a moment to decompress.
Damn it Celestia! You already put your entire “Marriage” in jeopardy by planning to just use him as a deflection tool and basically Trapping him in a loveless relationship. Now you are not only spying on him, but taking away his only safe haven!
You have ALSO put his friendship with Javelin at jeopardy by making it look like you two set this up!
I honestly hope he plucks your wings and punts you into the mountain peak before going back to Ponyville!
Uh oh. Dangit, Celestia. Incoming glorious fuck-up, or glorious fuck!
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That...... doesn't make any sense
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Not sure what to tell you then. They're related, and back in medieval times, being blood related to someone often meant that if something happened to them, you were obligated to be a part of it. Same principal here.
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So many ideas.
Luna: sister when did thou rediscover the mirror pool?
Luna: the pranks have been doubled!
Luna: sister..when did you learn how to reproduce asexually? Did you become a parasprite?
I'm typing this having just read this. This will either fail horribly or go unreasonably well. And frankly? I look forward to what actually happens.
Addition to my post from earlier.
Going a route I had not quite anticipated. And I'm loving the potential of how Sunshine and Anon could go.
Celestia's idea is either going to be masterfully brilliant or disastrously tragic -- really depends on just what her plan is when it comes to using this disguise. Also, I'm now wondering if Luna has a similar disguise that she has not used for some time. It wouldn't surprise me if she did have one. Definitely curious to see what happens next, particularly how Anon will react when he finds out who Sunshine actually is (which again will likely depend on how he finds out).
why i can smell tragedy gonna happen in the future now?
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So I feel like everybody and their mother has already stated this, but I'm going to do it anyway. This is a bad plan. Celestia, instead of giving Anon time and space to reflect and decompress, is crowding and manipulating him even more because she's not getting the results she wanted. This will lead Anon to being even more angry and unwilling to work with them. Unless this is going to turn into one of those RGRE stories where Anon, as a male, has no right to his own thoughts or opinions on things and Celestia just wants to make him miserable and ruined until he agrees because he's a broken husk. In that case she's on the right path.
There is absolutely no way that anything can go wrong here
Anon isn't about to unleash the beast and show pones just how far he can fling his shit, no sir
Damnit I was starting to enjoy this just to realize I’ve read what there is to read currently. Fuck well guess another waiting game for this story along with the hundreds of others…it’s a shame I find a good story an it’s either dead an has been for several years or a fairly recent one that’s still be worked on.
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um, you do realise that this story is actually already done. they said so in the summary. They're just updating it every MOnday and Friday
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Aye but it ain’t on there yet so technically it’s not done. :P
Damn got me checking every hour of Monday and Friday to see if it is updated yet, what did the author slip into my tea to get me so addicted to this.
but seriously though, it is a good fic. can't wait to check for more. (p.s if anyone reads this comment. I hope you have a lovely day)
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ahhh I wanna see the next chapter so bad ! curse you author for having me over the seat in this amazing chapter!
But that's, like, all of them. And a fair number of stallions, to boot.
Nothing like being in a love triangle with the other party of your relationship but in disguise. (Yes, I know this makes it a love quadrilateral.)
It can be any kind of weird you want it to be
Oddly inconsistent.
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That's it sunbutt, you're going into the Love Rhombus
Not sure how well disguising herself as another mare in order to get close to someone whose trust she's already broken is going to go over once he finds out this is another deception
Oh hell naw, thats how you get your organs stolen.
No cute girl would randomly approach my average lookin ass.
But i mean... If shes not cute as hell, but still cute, then i guess its alright