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Point Raven at a problem, squeeze her, and solutions come out.
awww, princess are the big sad
Javelin is a true fucking bro. We don't deserve Javelin.
Ravens about to pull a pro gamer move, just watch.
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Javelin may very well save the Diarchy, the nation, and pony kind with pure acts of broness.
Good man, there’s a time for fixing and a time for just letting your feelings out. I know I learned that the hard way when I was younger when I was the 24/7 need to fix the problem person.
I think the solution is obvious. He's going to have to marry Raven. And Javelin.
Nice
jav the bro that every person needs in there life .
I think you miss an N there
Also, yeah this looks painful but the bandage is rip, now they can properly heal. You know it kind of interesting, it all began because Luna heat just…hit her and Celestia might be fast approaching, yet they both seems to be fully aware and not at all, drunk. So maybe sadness can overrun lust.
I just hope when it comes to apologies they either wear a gas mask…or mantain the distance, otherwise a hug might turn into something more before they realized what is happening.
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The only two things extra that would make Jav perfect would be the ability to dispense blowjobs and pudding.
I hope that Javelin and Raven can clean up this train wreck
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jav likely knows anon needs some space so maby he packs and him and anon go on a short trip out of the city so anon can prosess everything without feeling like he is still there
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Damn right.... everyone needs a bro like Jav..... Anon, if you do make up with the princesses and marry them, your first order of business right thereafter, is to give Jav a knighthood or a title of nobility... He has more then earned it by sheer broness...
Thanks again C-W for another truly fantastic chapter. Nice bit of emotional scenes here this chapter and I loved the brotherly friendship moment between Javalin and anon here. I'm excited as always to see what happens next chapter and am curious to see how Raven will play her part in fixing Anon's and the Princesses relationship in the future. Lastly, I want to honestly ask who the pony on Anon's right is in the cover art of the story. I might just be having a dumb moment here and am just not recognizing the character but honestly I recognize everyone in the cover art except them. Thanks again C-W for all the hard work, and as always have fun writing.
Javelin and Raven bout to be the MVPs of this fic, I can see it now!
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter. The pony next to Anon on the coverart is Javelin.
Wait,
No one from you guys bring spading fork to riot on them?
Fuck, why iam the only one again...
*Throw away my spading fork, grumble*
im not going to lie. the way anon is wrote is that he is super retarded. like.. holy shit..
i would not see it as that bad. knowing that they wanted to keep dating him even as sunshine and nightshade would be flattering in a way. the princesses knew that they had a rocky relationship so they wanted to start fresh. and in the process they really did fall in love. i would not have seen that as a total betrayel and stormed out. i would of thought about it from there point of veiw and found it funny they couldent say no to me.
what he is doing is arrogant and selfish beyond belief. also knowing that luna does not like males but his head over heals for you.. damn.
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careful. people in these comment sections get big mad when you act like someone might use their brain instead of just their feelings.
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it's called a gut reaction some times shit hits the fan and you freak out and make dumb decisions I've been through something similar so I know what it's like no one is retarded for feeling and acting like he did some times people or events through you for one BIG loop and when that happens it feels the same as being either drunk or hopped up on pain killers you head spins if your mad you feel hot in the face rather quickly and you say and do the first thing on your mind the only difference with this from those two situations is that when it happens like this your way more lucid than you would be if drunk or drugged and afterward you just feel drained that with the confusing and understandably slightly depressing situation probably has him still not thinking straight not to mention he didn't sleep before this and likely still hasn't. that and the fact he walked likely all the way across town with nothing but his thoughts to keep him occupied probably just made things worse no one would be in their right mind during any of that so from my perspective every part of this made a ton of sense to me I don't see one flaw in how he was written here I may be biased cause like I said I've been close to where anon is and to be honest I reacted in a very similar way.
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funny but I don't get the reference, and now I"m curious where is that from? XD
This story is soo good, that it is really difficult to summarise it in key points, the way it's written, the characters, the action, the feels, and drama is over the roof so to speak, I really - really enjoy this one.
Will be very special to read it again, when it's complete, and finished.
In the meantime, I have listened to Mika's: Happy Ending during reading this chapter, I thought it was fitting.
Looking forward to see and read more, beucase it is awesome.
Thank you!
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Glad you like the story :D
Still got a little ways to go before it's finished, but I'm super excited for you all to see the ending!
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This is just a weirdly hostile comment section in general.
I really enjoy this story and it really keeps my attention. There really isnt enough good princess love and writting them in a way that does them justice. Feels very fluid to my imo.
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It's the blue balls. lots of very small, yet very insistent boners for anon lewding tiny horses.
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I don't think so. I think it's been this way since chapter one, and that was the only one that didn't edge us.
I saw that this awesome story had a new chapter and I jumped because it was so soon. The last chapter had me on the edge of my seat, so really looking forward to the next.
Somehow, chapter 2 was marked unread instead. I was betrayed.
Ooh wow the comment section is going off. I get it, Anon doesn't act rationally. Hey, everyone rea ts differently to high stress emotional moments. I consider myself quite rational but there are days where you just get overwhelmed by what happened be it a big thing that day or a lot of little things that happened everyday.
You just kinda get buried in those emotions and have a strong feeling to lash out yknow. It's either that or curl into a ball and self depreciate which is exactly what Anon is doing here. When he has a target of contempt he will lash out at them and when he doesn't he's just lying there being depressed. It how people process their emotions. Get over it. It's not the best or correct way but it's human.
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I agree with what you're saying. BUT fucking hell your grammar!
Ever head of full stops and commas? Because your paragraph was so hard to read for my dyslexic ass
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lol yeah I know English was never my best subject so my grammar wound up being atrocious. I normally use a program to help me with that when writing but it doesn't always work when I'm posting comments online my bad.
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I mean, pudding is pretty easy to make and...anyone (with a mandible) can give a blowjob. I guess that means Jav is perfect.
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IDK, I've noticed FimFiction in general has become a whole lot less tolerant of opposing viewpoints in the last year(-ish). It's almost as if the world's on fire and no one has any patience left.
yeesh, now i remember why i don't generally read comments. this story is FUCKIN AWESOME!
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Its almost like SJW idiocty is driving world to similar lunacy as of eve of great fuck up nr.2
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Yea, miss the good ol’ days when people called each other a slur and moved on with their lives instead of trying to destroy each other.
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This, but unironically.
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Nah he's in the right for feeling this way
That is EXACTLY how good friends should respond. Sometimes we need to vent, sometimes we need help.
B. Dylan Hollis fan?
Great chapter! Nice to see Anon got support, in to many stories character like Twilight try to painful degrees to bending things so Alicorns are not wrong or have always a plan etc etc.
To see someone take other sides because the Alicorns simply bucked up is a rare treat.
Javelin is a true true friend. (Que in mlp song)
Probably good the princesses aren’t taking their frustrations out on those assaulters with legal action right now…