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That visual of Anon going down the aisle and up the stairs was hilarious. I wonder what the fallout of those kisses at the end will be, both publicly and with the Sisters themselves.
Nice
And Anon in drunken pride with a big smile on his face looks to the crowd and raises both arms in the air and shouts "LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED IN HERE!!!!"
Well, Luna didn't just smith him right then and there, that is a plus. Boy are the newspaper gonna a go bananas with the hundred of pictures they just took.
Poor Anon he is so gonna a get scowlded…maybe it was her sister idea after all so…this could be consider an accident, jeje only Friday's will tell
Oof. Let's hope Anon doesn't get kidney failure or something from an unknown drug
Oh man, I died right at the moment he kissed them. This is so well and funnyly writen. Well played my man, well played.
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Fixed those issues. Must have slipped past me in editing lol. And yeah, it's gonna be a wild next chapter. It will be interesting to see what happens for sure ;)
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<3
Yes, let's use an untested drug on the alien. No possible way this could go wrong.
Hahaha! Man, that's absolutely amazing! Watch the crowd love the display as well.
JOOR ZAH FRUL!
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If he does it’d be bullshit considering they drugged him without thinking about potential consequences. Hopefully the writer doesn’t make them do something that stupid.
I wonder which is going to be considered more scandalous; the lewdness of the kiss or the fact that the consort, the male consort in RGRE, initiated?
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Oh man, editing is so hard to do on your own stuff, because you read it like you intended it in your head. It also doesn't help when the incorrect words are spelled correctly, so you don't even have the red squiggle going, "hey, you stuffed up here!"
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So you are saying it would be Celestia who should apologies for not thinking throw on giving him a tea THAT strong? I mean Inkwell warn him JUST a sip
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big facts. Doesn't help that my editor has dyslexia lmao
Best chapter yet.
Get out of my brain! I've been toying with an idea like that for a while (just in my head. No intention to actually write it). Sans the bit about parthurnaax being a royal consort, of course.
Well, I think we've all learned a very important lesson here. Don't drug poorly understood aliens from another universe right before sending them out to perform in a public royal ceremony. Granted hindsight is 20/20.
Wait wait wait, did they drug him with the equivalent of Kava Root!?
Oh hell, he is gonna have one hell of a hangover, wonder if the magic in the plant had a more agressive reaction due to him lacking magic?
Those kisses, I suspect after that this won’t be just a “Show” relationship! I highly doubt they will be able to deny SOME kind of attraction after that!
though I suspect multiple assassination attempts in the future from the spurned Nobles!
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I was kinda proud of that little easter egg :)
So why do I get the feeling anon won't remember any of that come morning the next day.
Also great work can't wait for more
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Hope you plan on expanding on that Easter Egg.
……Great now I can’t get the idea of Anon as a Dragon Rider out of my head, ala Eragon!
But in all seriousness, I really hope he chews them out for drugging him! They should have known better!
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Heck, let’s use an untested drug on the alien without even telling him!
...I’m sorry, human, what are these “mickeys” you speak of?
Oops. Should have given him that bong water in a teeny tiny teacup, of course he would want to drink the whole thing. Hopefully Luna doesn't hold this against him! The image of this guy rolling onto the stage is very funny to me, everybody is just like 'wha'
Wow, I get that this was played for laughs but I really hope there's some kinda repercussions for both Celestia and Raven. Celestia for thinking it'd be a good idea to use an untested drug on the human and Raven for thinking that drugging someone without their knowledge is any kind of acceptable. Hilarious outcome, yeah, but damn is that gonna be a (maybe literal, depending on side effects) kick in the head when he comes down.
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I will get into it more in the next chapter, but just for the sake of playing devil's advocate, Raven did only tell him to take a 'few sips'. Not chug the whole thing. Also, it's not an untested drug. Again, that will be explained next chapter.
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Oh, so it's been tested on humans before? Good to know they weren't about to poison him. But I'm not into the idea that its OK to tell someone to take sips of something without informing them of the risks when you describe it as something mundane. I mean, I've got a grandmother that swears that a little laxative in the morning is good for you but if she gave me a cup of what she told me was just nice earl grey tea with added laxative in it without telling me and said "Please, just take a couple sips." I'd sure as hell know who is the one at fault when I drink it all and end up in the hospital for dehydration.
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It hasn't been tested on humans, since Anon is the only human in Equestria. Like I said, it will be explained more in the next chapter. However, you are right in that they should have told him. Who knows, that might just come up later 🤷
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Ah, cool. Story's been pretty dang great so far, can't wait to read more.
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Maybe not unrest on species NATIVE to the magic rich planet, but certainly untested on a being NOT native to said planet.
They keep forgetting he isn’t native and it could kill him! Hell what if they had given him a hallucinogenic plant? Simply because they thought “it’s not bad for us, so that means he can use it too!”
I hope he spanks the both of them…… and Luna too for not stopping them!
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We'll have to see how he reacts.
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Glad you're liking the story! Only a few more days until the next chapter.
I was expecting him to throw up .. everywhere
Next please
At least it was Paartysnaax and not Alduin
Not sure who to blame for that one.
I see the Skyrim in there! THOU CANT HIDE IT I SEE IT I SAY!
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You only get one chance at a first kiss. Do it right.
Me after the Kiss
i am actually really disappointed no one has mentioned Paarthurnax yet. the shout lord himself.
Doing a Skyrim VR run-through and just got to the point where you meet the big derg himself, what a coincidence lol
I'm just imagining him gmod ragdolling up the stairs lol.
Ah. Paarthy boy got some Sunbutt huh? Lucky guy.
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For being several centuries old, Celestia didn't think that one through very far!
i don´t think it is a case of too much but more a case of too strong liquid corage
Good soup.
How does he get over the fact that he's gonna be marrying what was a lesser animal in his world. I'd imagine it would take more than, what, a few months to get over that