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nobles suck
The wait between chapters is killing me bro
Welp here we go
Here we go.
Why do they think that Lying to Anon is going to be fine? The very reason he's angry with them in the first place is because of lies about who they where, now they want his best friend to lie to him about why he's going to this place.
Can only end well.
Although, I agree with everyone else in saying that I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice
I wonder how this is going to turn out.
My only guess is it wont be what any of them are expecting
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Yeah, my issue with this currently is that Raven and Javelin know that Anon is upset with the Princesses because they lied/gaslight him. And in turn they are manipulating/lying to him to try to force him to listen to the princess’ apology.
Atleast Celestia seems somewhat responsible and respectable in that she specifically told Raven not to force Anon to do anything.
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Agreed!
Urrgghh, the suspence! I dying over here!
Okay two things, first off amazing chapter I can feel many used handkerchiefs incoming
Second, that was a straight-up evil cliffhanger you know that?
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I can think of two possible scenarios:
1.) Anon knows what’s up and doesn’t show up at the aquarium with Javelin.
2.) Anon becomes so upset at the shenanigans of all four, that he both breaks off his friendship with Javelin and reveals the Princesses’ secret to the world.
Dawn of the Final Day, let’s gooooo
The makeup is going to be great. I’m really feelin’ it!
That should be ensure. (Unless you're buying them insurance!)
That should be undulated.
Can't wait to see how that meeting goes down.
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I can think of several more as
-They will be in an enclosed space
-There are 3 mares in heat
-Javelin is attracted to at least one of them
The question will be if Jav can control himself and if anon will step in assuming he has not left the building already.
But ya I do not see any outcome with anon being happy about this
one way to see in the end , the road to this possibly healing between the two is going to take some time , anon trying to find his trust again he's, really really torn between was it real or not can leave a man in broken state
so ethier anon going to hear out Celestia and say he needs more time
or try to give it another chance . but to heal and get to know them both starting over from stage 1 between the two
And now we begin, this next chapter will be tense.
Cadence sure will have to pull all of her stops to make this right.
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I literally HEARD the cutscene changing to the Final Day when you said that!
Bring on the Candy!
Can we just get to the make up already im dying over here
I’m expecting the next chapter to be relaxing and everyone just looks at the fish.
Oh boy here we go
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Nobles? I thought they were overgrown foals with their heads stuck so far up their asses that they don’t need to see a doctor if they need a colonoscopy.
Sorry if this comes across as condescending but I'm fairly sure the plural of Pegasus is pegasi
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too fine a distinction?
(reminded me of the phrase at the end of this: "Is this a real holy war, or a bunch of deluded boopholes croaking each other? Too fine a distinction?")
Release the
krakenanon11058765
I have one better
"Release the Mi Amore Cadence!"
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Option 3 (or Maybe 2A?): Anon is so pissed, he straight up leaves Equestria, goes to Minos, and meets a Big Tiddy Cow Girl.
Equestria declares War on Minos.
Princess CandyCorn is gonna have her work cut out for her.
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I was thinking more along the lines that Anon gets upset, returns to his territory, and meets a mare that he later weds. Meanwhile, Celestia and Luna have to deal with the aftermath of their choices — forced marriage to a horrible nobleman and the pain of losing Anon.
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Fair enough.
I figure we'll get some sort of interesting development in the next chapter or two, but it's always fun to speculate.
I might have to write a story about the adventures of Anon (unrelated) in Minos.
Or, to be more accurate, brainstorm a bunch of ideas, but never actually put them together into a coherent piece of Horse Words.
Hmm. I can see a way for this to work out, maybe-sorta-kinda. If the SLM mares catch wind of Anon going there, they might decide it's his fault their stallions are in custody instead of their own fault for attacking him; since they've already said ,"They were good boys! They didn't do it!", clearly someone else is to blame. Thusly the mares will show how innocent their stallions are by attacking Anon at the aquarium themselves, 'proving' that attacking humans in Equestria is part of equestrian culture and therefore not a crime.
As he's being
attackedculturally enriched by the mares, he is knocked into an aquarium tank with carnivorous-fish-version parasprites, either accidentally or intentionally. Seeing him in actual danger, the princesses rush over to save him, creating a Big Damn Hero moment where Anon realizes the princesses' feelings and intentions from the start. Then the mares get to see their husbands again, much sooner than either group expected.But this is a wild guess. I'm on the edge of my seat to see how this goes.
"Sure they were all arrested on site, but they didn't go there so that means they can't have been arrested! Since they aren't arrested, you have to let them go. QED!"
Seeing some of the comments for this chapter I'm getting the distinct impression that a number of readers are projecting their own baggage onto the characters here. Some of you do realize that none of the main characters nor their friends are villains in this story, they're just screwing-up(badly), they aren't evil. And no, they aren't your ex- either.
Anyway looking forward to the next(likely painful) chapter.
Honestly I understand both sides.
And this littke plan def will backfire in away they don't expect.
But there's probably a small chance that something no-one expects happens which helps the situation somehow.
Expect the expected and unexpected.
Besides, if all else fails
Fish.
Plot twist: the stallions didn't care that Anon married Celestia, they just needed an excuse to go to jail. Now Jet and his bros can just chill together far away from their estrus-plagued, sex-crazed, dick-flattening wives. All according to keikaku.
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Eh, at this stage the trope is entirely expected, and a hard swerve twist would be welcomed. Like Anon being balls-deep in Jav >.>
Damn the drama is killing me, I like this story quite a bit.
i really hope anon in this story pulls his head out of his ass. the way he went about all this i really fucking hate him.
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Now that's an idea.
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I’m a bit more understanding of it. The lie does t seem as bad to us, who know both sides, but the MC doesn’t have that luxury. He’s still an ass, but I see where he’s coming from. It’s like your mom told you that you could have anything from the buffet you liked and you go up there and find only casserole and boiled veggies…the same thing your mom had originally offered you, lol. Finding out you were given the illusion of choice often makes people even angrier, even if the sisters expected to use the disguises as a springboard for him to other females.
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But he did have a choice. That wasn’t an illusion. It’s just that out of all the mares he could have chosen, he happened to fixate on the only two that were the disguised royal pony sisters. Really not their fault that they turned out to be his type, now, is it?
My God the universe has a sense of timing.
What are the odds that I would be reading this story at the same time I started listening to the soundtracks from Gankutsuou again?
Seriously, listen to the opening song "we were lovers", and tell me if that huts a few soft spots.
Solution or absolute desaster, i doubt we get a in between
I actually really like just how the main characters are being portrayed as smart. Anon saw the signs and suspected what was going on with Sunshine and Nightshade even if he didn't want to believe it, and Celestia recognized the set up before even arriving at the aquarium even if she is going along with it. Honestly asides from the "disguise ourselves and fall in love with our alter egos" trope this is a really well done slice of life set up.