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I mean he dident explode at them during when he was drunk so im pretty sure he is just annoyed at the moment so im more interestid in what would or wiill happen when he is less composed
Frankly, Anon was, to my view, extremely justified with how angry he got with both of them.
This situation is well beyond fucked up for him, to be told "you get to have nothing, so we can have everything"... yeah, I'm not sure I would have been any more polite myself.
Yeah Luna has been kind of a bitch. Good on Anon for standing up for himself finally.
Very interesting!! I like dhow he isn't letting them just push him to the side. Oh no!! He's telling them exactly how he feels
I really like how more realistic this story is going with how he is reacting rather than just going along with absolutely everything
cute, their first couples fight
Mmph, that chapter was cathartic. Anon basically said what I was thinking, in much harsher terms
What a twist!…few autors inject so much reality into this but what Anon says has weight. He is trying to play ball even when Luna just keep giving him the stink eye, he hold his tongue when feeling none of them really love them even when that must likely broke his heart a little, the drug incident even if it wasn't intentional and now, well he is very limited on what to do if he ever wants to obtain a lady to love him.
Unless they form some sort of 'mistress' or let him build say law. Things got WAY too complicate to find love.
And believed or not…this is healthy, they are talking honestly sharing their feelings. Both Princesses finally remember that they have been just thinking on themselves and not really consider much on how this affects Anon, even if he had trying to jump throw hops and play ball as much as possible. Frankly you can only push someone so far before he breaks so…I think he didn't went neither too harsh or too easy with the sisters, just right.
P.S: Cunt? Is Anon british? No wait…I think they also used it in Scotland, is Anon from the United Kingdom?
So glad you pointed out how Anon was getting shafted with this deal. Being royalty is nice and all, but being condemned spending the rest of your life as an unloved trophy husband to ultimately die alone is a bit of a shit deal.
Ah Luna did HE thought about or did YOU wish that he thought about it? Or better yet, were you hoping he DID just that? Because as far as we know he probably thought you two look like a white and blue blurs
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Could also be an Aussie, we use it a lot here too.
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True, I think it a nice little detail, that tell us a bit of Anon and where does he came from
I can understand their arrangement to a certain extent. But they can't expect him to watch them kiss and cuddle while he's left out to dry. Then, Luna is way out of line with how she's been treating him. There's no reason to be that mean to someone that is doing you a favor.
wow, ok, as i understand this, Luna is a child, that has been spolied by her sister, Celestia is bisexual, but prefer stallions over mares, she is just indulging Luna, Luna has been asking for more and more in the past, but there were things Celestia couldn't give, it made Luna throw the biggest temper tamtrum and become nightmare moon, after all the ordeal, Luna didn't change because she was on the moon, so is still a big child, the elements only purged the nightmare, so she didn't learn anything, so Luna is still acting spoiled, she needs to be told down, and Celestia won't do it, that is all i have been gathering from all the chapters.
They pretty much kept asking him to look at it from their point of view without once seeing it from his, I think that pretty much sums it up.
Edit: I just realized something, if Luna actually went through with her threats wouldn't that break the contract and take way Celestia's powers? Anon may have some leverage after all.
Yeah. I'd expected more. But at the same time this sort of situation is very very tricky. It is literally a eggshell mine field. Each way you go about this never seems to be the right way. You just got to roll with the punches and do your best. Also. Love how Anon called Luna out on her attitude. I love Luna but her general mood towards Anon was not acceptable.
Dear Mr. just the author,
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Let them carry out a nice conversation and let romance take slowly over, perhaps there will evolve some Love... (hopefully)
J
Nice
No I feel like Anon’s reaction makes sense for most people.
“I’m just a prop so you and your sister and go to town on each other while I’m kept in the back room next to the mop bucket and unpaid interns? I’d say go fuck yourself you two would do that so drop dead.”
I'm more surprised he brought being alone, while the sisters being in love , he has to play ken doll and obey while it happend , and very fact he knows alone and worse to have no one not even family be with him. makes it sadder .
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If I were in this situation I would probably be even harsher; I'd find a way to deliberately break the contract so that the Alicorns do lose their powers; leave Equestria in the hooves of mortal ponies.
I really hope this doesn't turn into guilty sex. You've set up this Anon as somebody in tune with his emotions and able to pick up easily on others. I doubt he would accept either princess dating or having sex with him just because they feel guilty.
Have to admit, both princesses are acting like complete bitches. Luna in particular.
Drugging someone without consent is unacceptable, and in a world with many species (not including the protagonist who literally isn't of the world) it's certainly possible that a "harmless" drug could be lethal to another species. At a bare minimum you'd need to know that.
There's zero consideration for the other side.
Honestly the protagonist would be well within his rights to tell them to go fuck themselves (as they are!) and walk away. Because they're not deserving of any help with behaviour and attitudes like that.
This is the best piece of writing I've read in a long time.
If there was a way to condense this into a quote, it would be top of the list.
The Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze
It truly is a tight situation.
Before this story, we are not really aware of who Anon IS.
Who are his friends, what does he do to keep himself busy, has he tried to get a relationship?
Now, due to circumstance, he has been pulled again into another situation where his options are limited even further.
Personally, I feel like Anon could have mouth bombed Luna a bit more, but then again this is a tricky situation.
We don't know enough yet of how Anon has adapted to living in Equestria. In the earlier chapters it sounded like he was very isolated in Canterlot. They give him a mansion and a noble status, but that's not going to satisfy the loneliness he feels.
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Anon did the right thing and left the situation, otherwise it could have got violence or very messy. they can all cool down and speak about it the next day
To paraphrase the meme: you already had my attention, but now you have my respect. Very nice.
... was this an unknown side-effect of rhineroot on a human? (perfectly justifiable) aggression?
and Luna definitely isn't being fair with anon whatsoever. especially since she definitely displayed some tiny level of tsundere from the kiss anon had given her despite her bitchiness.
Celestia is more or less avoiding how anon might feel about all of this. damn uncaring immortals. hmph.
anon's gonna end up friendlier with raven and javelin if things keep going the way they have been.
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i use cunt pretty regularly and i'm american, but ive prolly absorbed it from the aussies. wait no, the brits are to blame.
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No doubt. It would be a loose loose situation for everyone. Glad he left and didn't make it worse.
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:)
Thank you! I was pretty proud of that line when I came up with it XD
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Agreed. Anon's in a tight spot.
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Thank you <3
Tbh, there are a lot of quotes from this chapter that I'm really proud of.
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Moonhorse did need a stern talking to.
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I feel the same. I honestly can't see a situation where someone would be okay with that unless they were just a masochist.
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story :D
This chapter honestly was a bit cathartic to write. Not sure if I'm the only one, but when I write a character acting a certain way, I kind of shift my mood to fit the way that character is acting. Angry character makes me angry when writing, etc. So getting to have that bit of blowback in Luna's face felt good to write lmao. As for Anon's nationality, you will find out in the future :)
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I really wanted to go with the "angsty teenager vibe" for Luna, at least in this part of the story. I'm both excited and nervous to see what people think of how this chapter is going to change that
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I'm not a fan of guilty sex either. Don't worry, there's a lot of story left for their situations to change and develop.
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We use cunt as well in the USA.
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Historically, wives of kings had a lot of sex with other people in the court. The problem is the massive fear factor of the rulers of Equestria. No one would risk getting banished to the moon by Celestia, or occurring Luna's wrath, by having sex with their boyfriend. So even if they green lighted, "Fuck the staff." I doubt there would be a single taker. Would you risk sneaking around with Luna's man?
Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
This was my exact train of date thought.
They only really care about themselves and their relationship, their Reputation and nothing else. They were forced to choose and only saw him as a way to get out of Celestias own stupidity, a tool to be used and forgotten.
I honestly hope he just ups and Nopes off, there would be no fault in that decision at all. Go back to ponyville and pretend like nothing ever happened and damn the consequences.
Though even IF they try and mend this gap, there will always be the question of “Do they love me or am I just a tool” it would eat at him constantly and prevent him from having any life around them.
Honestly I am torn though, I hope he leaves, but I also hope he stays and ruins them.
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Yeah. That is very true.
I'm so shipping Anon and Javelin.
Get a little lesbian action in there.
Maybe get them both wrestling in jello, or a wet t shirt contest. 😎
Monk
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Normally I would agree, but in this case Javelin has to much loyalty to the sisters to be in any kind of stable relationship with him.
Anon was harsh enough. He really should have thought and brought up those issues long before, but I can see the shock and surrealness of the situation overwhelming and confusing him up to this point. I totally get it taking a while to process one's feelings.
I can see Celestia and Luna making a lot of assumptions up to this point. Of course anyone wants to marry them even without love or lovemaking--there is a grand title, wealth, influence, and lifetime pass to the gala. Nevermind that Anon already had a lot of the above from becoming a Lord. Anon was also the only human--what are the odds he even finds ponies or any Equestrian species attractive?
I wonder if divorce is an option without breaking the magical contract. I know it was in No Nose Knows, but that's a different fanfic.
my question is , and yo writer, does this anon have family that he misses , very much I can't imagine him feeling more alone then ever , now more then ever , will we see him ever think of his family or his old life
Oh good, I was waiting for the blowup. Because seriously, they're kind of being really horrible about this situation, and Anon has every right to just spit in their faces on this one.
Finally, a human that doesn't take that shit on the chin! Hopefully the sisters can ACTUALLY treat the dude right come next chapter.
https://youtu.be/H-nl7KRk-TM
I would like to see anon still angry in the next chapter, and Tia, Luna trying to reassure. To see if Anon wants to stay or not but thats up for him to decide
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Anon has been living in Equestria for about a year and a half. He's had time to learn that he can't go home, and he's come to grips with that reality. I didn't really want to focus on it too much in this story. I feel like it's done to death.
Ouch. That honeymoon ended fast.
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Good to hear. Eighteen chapters of homesick angst does get old after a while. Especially when it comes packaged with the "my life back home was absolute shit and nobody loved me" origin story.
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My thoughts exactly.
If you see that, that's because I gave a thumbs down.
the beta was very strong in the man, so strong in fact that I cut my connection with the character, that I was disappointed to fall short by the lack of character of the man (or boy), I said to myself: damn not another simp.
Then another chapter comes out:Well ... if you want a relationship with a mare, I'm sure that it could be accommodated ... but it would have to be kept completely secret. Also the mare must be able to keep our secret as well. "Celestia replied.
"Okay ... and if I found the perfect mare, but she couldn't move to the castle and help me keep your secrets ... then what? Am I supposed to just lose her and keep pretending to love you two only when there's other people around? 'Cause if that's the situation here, then I'm out. " Anon firmly asserted.
"Anonymous, please understand our situation. If you were to be caught with another mare, it could spell disaster for everything we've been trying to accomplish here in the first place." Celestia offered, holding her hoof up in a plating manner.
"All I'm hearing here is how things could be worse for you two. What about how this affects me? I was under the impression earlier that there was some tiny level of attraction there that made you want to choose me over any pony in that court. Now, you're expecting me to live a loveless life in a world that isn't my own just so that you two can keep your incest going? " Anon questioned, some anger quickly slipping into his tone of him.
"Anonymous, please calm down. The situation is much more complicated than that-" Celestia began.
"Well un-complicate it then." Anon cut her off.
Luna slammed her hooves on the table, "Do not speak over my sister, whelp!" She shouted.
"Oh fuck off! I'm getting really fucking tired of your goddamn attitude over there! You've been a complete cunt to me ever since I got here, and last I checked, it's your fucking fault I'm here in the first place! " Anon furiously shouted, pointing an accusing finger at Luna.
"Anon! Nightmare Moon returning and dragging you into our world was not Luna's fault!" Celestia exclaimed, "It was a mistake that we've done everything in our power to rectify, and I would appreciate it if you didn't bring up the matter in such an accusatory manner." She explained.
"No, no, no. I'm done with the mister nice guy shit. I've been as polite and courteous as I can be, but I draw the fucking line at being told to die alone so that you two degenerates can fuck without consequence! " Anon continued to shout, pushing his chair out and standing to his feet from him.
Holy shit is this happening?
and that's why I revoked my thumb down and I'm Switzerland again.
I wonder what the next chapter will be like?
Thanks again C-W for another awesome chapter. I have to say as I was reading the previous chapters I kept having thoughts of this exact situation with Anon and the Sisters getting into a fight over their selfishness and them all but demand Anon to die alone for them here. I didn't think I'd see the fight though since Anon up to this point seemed pretty much to express a "take it, and go with the flow" kind of vibe. Low and behold I actually got to see the fight this chapter and it was probably more satisfying than it should seeing Anon call the Sisters out on their shit. Thanks again C-W for such a well written and interesting story thus far, and as always have fun writing.
Sigma Male Grindset #627
Personally tell heads of state to fuck off
Finally a human in Equestria story where the human isn't a walking doormat.
no matter how much celestia wants to protect luna one of the few moments where the biggest mistakes of their immortal lives are in sight where besides bringing it to the world and still forces him to do such a thing, because in fact he wouldn't have much choice if he really refusing things would get complicated for them especially as luna faces everything, so yes author you could give even more weight to sena, but sena is good so I won't complain, just positively create it.
portuguese brazil, my english is a little broken sorry