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babbatooui01


a pegasus who would give everything to save his friends or loved ones, even his life

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You’re welcome

Thanks for the follow! :yay:

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Mostly the romance. Honestly I liked everything, how realistically Spike acted when compared to the show, how his and Derpy's relationship was paced, the length of the chapters. Also how everything just sort of... made sense... I guess is the best way to put it. Everything just fit together on a way that made it easy and relaxing to read. Hope that makes sense to you as an author. This is the first time anyone has ever asked me for feedback on something they wrote, hope I responded in a way that you can understand. :moustache:

Thank you so much for reading Blonde Moments. In my efforts to continuously improve, I have a question:

What about the story made you like it? Was it the character interactions? The emotions? Romance? I'd love to know what to continue doing.

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