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YES!!
Honestly the time skip is fine. What are we gonna read anon being a passive aggressive drunk while they plan a way to get back into his good graces? Nah I think you handled it fine with the skip.
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Ditto. The timeskip is fine, and I'd prefer more of the story continuing along its current lines.
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should have had him do the pose they do in tron with the disks but with it. or have him hitting chrisalis mid swing
Meh, go with normal plan. I dont need fillers.
Time skip is fine, I want I trial for Comet Star.
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I second this.
I can already see that the events of the time skip being stagnate/slow with both anon and the princesses being in such a depressive state. I already read enough stories that draw out events like that to the point I want to eat a brick. I wish to see progress with this story while you (le author) are still posting chapters at a relatively frequent pace.
Time skip was fine. Don't need to read about depressed ponies and people. Keep working on advancing the story.
Time skip was fine. Keep doing what you're doing
Considering how little really changed in that six months, I get the feeling reading about what happened would be like watching the Endless Eight arc from The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, and that writing it would be at least a hundred times worse.
Timeskip is alright, as long as I get to see more of this recent development of anons relationship grow!
Keep the normal chapters coming!!!
I personally don't care to read about that 6 month gap. I feel it would just drag out the story too much. I'm happy with this just continuing on as is.
I would enjoy seeing the story continue as normal and maybe, later on, have the chapters for the skipped six months...GIVE ME MORE ADORABLE ROYAL COUPLE SHIT
...and maybe more nobles being cockblocked. Hell, go all french revolution on them if need be, it is about time the notorious Canterlot nobility gets off their power trip.
Thank you for asking and great writing as always.
In my opinion I just said make another story Explains what happens in the 6 months gap instead of adding to this story
Keep the time skip.
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Keep posting as normal is my vote! Loving the story so far!!! I have never looked forward so much to Mondays and Fridays!!
I personally would prefer that you just keep going as usual i like the story as it is
Stay the course. You can add the time skip part later. It seems silly to stop now.
Second hand embarassment is temporary, Frying Pan of doom is forever.
Oo birthday chapter cool
I agree on keeping the normal chapters going, the six month gap chapters would just be depressing.
I'd say the time skip is fine.
Stay the course
and then they fuck!
I'd prefer you just keep posting chapters as usual since telling us what happened in those six months would feel like a waste of time
Honestly, the time skip works fine, keep on with the story as it's going.
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He literally said if not done never, it'll never be done
Some have already made this point, but because so little had changed after that six-month gap, it seems pointless to delve further into what happened. If suddenly after that time, Anon and the princesses were together, then I'd be like "hold up.... what!?" But in this case, no, staying the course makes the most sense in my opinion.
No one really wants to see what happened during a six month time skip or even one that takes a few weeks. In anime, a time skip is normally an entire training period or something, and we don't want to see six months worth of training, now do we? I say just leave the six month gap as it is and continue on with our scheduled program.
Was going to just say "continue as normal" bit it seems this has already been said ad nauseum.
So I'll instead say, let the sceptical never stop!
Noticed an extra word.
One too many 'damaged'.
I don't think adding extra chapters covering the time skip would add much, if anything, to the story.
If you want to cover some of what happened during that time, maybe have Celestia and/or Luna ask Anon what he did while they were apart. Followed by a flashback with Anon adjusting to living with Javelin and being mopey. Or a brief exposition by Anon explaining a typical day.
So far the story is good and I look forward to more.
The time skip is fine, truly. Besides, the most interesting thing that might have happened is a mare trying to use Anon for his status or such. Don't want to pile on too much negativity.
I'm of the view that it would probably help smooth some narrative things out (no matter what you do, time skips are rough and jarring on a narrative) and make the actions of all parties a little easier to process for readers. HOWEVER, I can't think of a single thing that you could include that wouldn't just bog the story down to a crawl and do more harm than good. Sure, you could probably add in a scene of Anon getting shot down in the dating scene, but once you do it what then? You got, maybe a page of writing, at most a single chapter, for basically a single scene that adds nothing of any importance to the story and adds in bloat and unnecessary fluff. The most you get is x chapters of Anon and the princesses living in a haze that gets us nowhere and doesn't grow any of the characters.
I have to vote to keep the skip. As much as I hate time skips, there's really nothing to be gained from filling it in.
About skipping time in history. This missed time can be used as additional mini-chapters, since they generally may not affect the plot. But I don't think they are needed.
If I somehow did not clearly write, my English is at a low level. 😐
I would prefer you write the chapters for the 6 month gap. That was a little too jarring.
Full speed ahead! We can have hearth felt drama later!
Time skip is fine. I can't imagine what could be filled in within those six months that would improve the story.
Hi, I think there is no point in 6 months, it's better to continue the story further, I really liked it and I look forward to the release of the chapter every day
As much as I love to read new chapters of this story I have to say that I'm for leaving the time skip in the story maybe put them in a mini chapters
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dude i communicate through xD translator
There was nothing wrong with skipping a span of time where nothing was happening.
The problem was that the time spanned six months.
It took six months for the protagonist to do something, something worth writing about.
And he wasn't even going to! It took a hostile military invasion for him to get moving.
Spelling error that you missed: They're getting around to it. The south hall leading straight to the dining room was less damaged damaged , so repairs have started there
I have no problem with the story as is. Not need to further explain what happened to all the character. Sometimes a time-out can help
While perhaps the time skip could have been done a bit more smoothly, I can't think of anything that could have happened during that intervening period that would be significant to the story. Six months of moping anon would be a bit much!
Keep the time skip. I think you are totally right that it was taking forever to get to the good bit. At best, though it wouldn’t fit into the writing style of the story, I think a single chapter with snippets of diary entries from maybe Raven and Javelin, showing how their charges have changed over those 6 months would be sufficient. We don’t need a full recap.
The story could have been done more gradually, but now that we know the aftermath of the six month gap, covering it now seems a little pointless.
Well when Anon learned the truth it reminded me of some Stabbing Westwards songs. I think that the 6 months gap 8s fine as it showed Anon as he was hurting and trying to seal his pain and heart away while he tried to make sense of his feelings more or less. I honestly would have you just continue on forward.
A compromise: show flashbacks between the ponies and Anon in those six months, and how they cope with the breakup… just an idea.
Keep the timeskip! It's appropriate for the pacing of the story. Makes it seem like everything went from this exciting whirlwind to a painful, lonely drudge through the breakup period. Plus adding it in now wouldn't really add anything to the story. We're passed it.
I feel the pacing and time skip are fine just the way they are. Filling in those six months would drag the story on unnecessarily and destroy that pacing.