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PegPony
I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
PegPony
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Twilight’s no virgin. (I know because I fucked her.)
I rarely comment on these kinds of stories.
But I was unfortunate enough to see this. Thusly, I only have one word to give.
Burn.
yeah. no one ever wanted to see sludge bang twi. not saying you shouldn't have wrote it but maybe it should've stayed in your mind.
I wished Sludge broke Twilight's mind and her his servant-wife.
Well this killed my soul
I just made my account like two minutes ago, and this is the first thing I see…
Can I just say - WTF COMPELLED YOU TO WRITE THIS?! WHY?!?!?
Sludge Fucks Twilight...............
WHY!!!!
man this is so fucking hot
I’ve officially never heard a worse shipping pair than Sludge and Twilight, congrats.
10729869
Okay buddy go back to the attic now.
Uh, forgot to take your medication today, sir?
Ah. Good. Now we know who to blame.
please stop writing this kind of stories thanks and goodbye
(why sludge and Twilight bruh)
I see you came to look at the comments and I wanted to say have a good day!
Lol This is a masterfully horrible pairing. Well done.
I'm just here for the comments.
Saw this and that clopfic with Spike and Twilight, I chose the latter.
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Don't mind me. Just here to drop some good music.
10730192
Nothing like a head-scratchingly rough fic to bring the fandom together again.
Normally I like your stories, I'm not keen on this one.
From what I can see nobody likes this story and to be honest that's fine. However, don't insult me or blame me for writing this story, I wrote this story for a fan and if you don't like it that's your business, but don't make things personal. You chose to read it, you knew it was Sludge and Twilight Sparkle, so don't complain to me about reading something you knew you wouldn't like. If you don't like it, then don't read it. Simple.
10730372
From what I can see, just about no one likes this story. And to be honest? That's fine. However, don't insult your readers or blame them for downvoting it. You posted your creation for a 'fan' in a public place: if the public doesn't like your work, that's their business. Because disliking things is a matter of personal taste. They chose to read it, they knew it was about Sludge and Twilight -- but they didn't know how poorly you would execute the idea. They had no way to recognize that they wouldn't like the results before they saw the actual writing. And if you don't understand how reading works, then don't post stories.
Simple.
10730424
Obviously, I haven't made my point clear enough.
1. At no point did I insult or blame my readers, I specifically said it's OK if people don't like it, but to not insult me on a personal level.
2. Did I write this poorly? Perhaps, but peoples main complaint seems to be about the pairing rather than the quality of my writing.
You do make a good point, but was it really necessary to turn my perfectly reasonable comment into one massive criticism?
10730442
If you didn't like the criticism, you shouldn't have read it.
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10730455
It's not that I didn't like the criticism, it's the way you did it, you mocked me by rewording what was an innocent comment.
10730054
Despite my earlier comment disagreeing with the whole SludgeXTwilight thing. I still find the story to be really hot and sexy!
I liked it
10730473
Considering you pump out multiple poorly-written stories filled to the brim with nastiness (and have been doing so for months) each week you've earned being mocked.
Also, if you're taking requests/commissions you could at least be kind enough to your customers to put effort into the stories since they're for someone else and that would get you more customers in the first place. The quality of work you're giving to folks is like the nutritional value of a Twinkie.
10730594
Thank you.
10730610
Believe it or not, I do put effort into these stories and thus far every person I have written a story for has been satisfied with the results. It just so happens that nobody else (except for a few people) seems to like them. I don't think anything I do should warrant complete strangers to openly insult or mock me just because they don't like the stories and/or how I write them, if my writing isn't for you, then stop reading and just move on.
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10730619
It sounds like you need to set standards for improvement if these are what you consider effort.
You getting ratio'd nearly every story is more than a few people.
You could always write well instead.
10730473
Yes, you did say something stupid. That's literally the joke, you're doing great sweetie. Very literate.
10730685
1. The people I wrote the stories for are satisfied, that's all that matters.
2. I'm never going to please everyone.
3. People don't think I write well, which is fine.
10730715
I don't understand why what I said was stupid, in a nutshell all I said was "Feel free to dislike the story, but don't verbally attack me".
10730726
“I’m not going to please everyone,” you cry as you neglect to get your writing on par with what would feasibly be taught to a middle school or junior high student.
10730442
Yes, you did. You said:
You spoke to your audience in a very condescending manner, acting as if they were too stupid to realize they'd read something they obvjously knew they wouldn't like. Nobody disliked this story because of the pairing, because, after all, obscure pairings are good ideas for fanfics and readers actively seek them out. It was the way in which the story was written that people didn't like.
10730726
No, it shouldn't be all that matters. If you're going to publish a story on a public forum, you have to consider them too. You're not just writing for an audience of one.
No, it's not fine. If people are telling you constantly that your writing is poor, that's a bad thing and should alert you to the fact that maybe you should take into consideration their criticisms and try to improve on your writing.
10730743
I can't write well, I get it. Please stop mocking and insulting me, that won't help.
10730768
You make a very good point, it was not my intention to come across as condescending and should have chosen my words more carefully. I shouldn't just consider the person I am writing the story for and if people criticize my writing then I should try to improve. That's all I will say on the matter.
I rather enjoyed this story, and not just because it features Sludge (I think I'm the only other person to write clop featuring him).
10730034
welcome to this site! we have such site to show you. some nice and some like this
10731190
Thank you
10731131
You're on a site where you need to be 13+ to be registered and should be 18+ if you're producing adult content for yourself and others. From story one to story twenty seven you've shown that you don't have writing ability on a technical level that never really pushes past the minimum age to use the site, and your ability to show story-related elements like pacing are at the same level. This site has a writing guide and multiple outlets on how to improve your writing that are easy to find. People are even closing the amount of effort you need to do for the baby steps by telling you in your own comment sections what is wrong with your stories, that is, aside from the fact that most of them are about high school girls raping animals.
You say that you're a kinky fetishistic loser, but it seems way more likely that your kink is whining and giving people sub-par writing. Thank goodness you don't appear to be charging anyone for these, because if you were, I'd say you were cheating them.
10731221
I could accept your criticism better if you stopped demeaning me and making me feel worthless. I don't understand why you find it necessary to use such harsh and hurtful phrases, call me childish if you want, but I think you are approaching this the wrong way.
10731240
No, he's pretty on point. Have you perchance considered not sucking? Dozens of others did using this amazing concept called hard work.
10731246
Hardwork? What’s that?
10731278
I think it's some sort of vegetable. One of the greens one?
10731246
I don't understand why you are doing this.
10731240
You’ve cranked out over 100,000 words since January of this year. That’s insane, and not in a good way. If you put 1/18th of the effort into writing well that you put into being an assembly line of stories about teenagers raping animals, I think you’d be taking a step in the right direction.