Fluttershy brings her brother to her friends so they can get to know him. Fluttershy's friends will be in for a huge surprise as her brother turns out to be a super hot hunk that is exactly their type. This meeting can turn into a huge completion to win the heart of Fluttershy's brother.
This story's version of Fluttershy's brother is based off of the one from the comic made by AwesomeSendpie
funny enough i prefer zephyr, he at least some what relatable, i got siblings and i been fluttershy dealing with sisters crap and i been zephyr making my sisters deal with my crap, Gentleshy is like what zephyr thinks he is
He's better than Zephyr.
I know this is probably not really important to ask but what season takes place
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It takes place during Season 6.
Hmm. I like the idea of this and where it is going, but for some reason, with the dialog at least, for me anyways, it feels really forced and slightly rushed.
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Oh ok got it
Well then that was a pretty interesting story so basically Fluttershy's brother is visiting and she can't wait to introduce him to her friends which of course they never met him yet but when gentlyshy showed up the girls went kind of Love Struck when they saw him and basically everything kind of went downhill from there and Fluttershy is getting really annoyed by her friends things kind of escalated really quickly when they took a tour around Ponyville and Fluttershy just had enough with her friends attitude saw the girls felt bad and they apologize for their behavior which he accepted and they actually enjoyed each other companies and everything but then he has to go home and someday they can visit each other soon well this was a pretty interesting story a little fast but interesting nice job on it
Okay now don't get me wrong with Zephyr Breeze I felt like the OC that I saw in a fan-made comic is pretty cool but either way Fluttershy still care for her brother no matter what they do she's just a caring person she is 😊
p.s. Fun Fact that comic inspired me to make my O.C.
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That was really sweet~♡~Adorabobles!‿!
Nice sweet story. Surprise we didn’t see Starlight, Trixie, or Maud. I wonder how they would react
i though Gentleshy was gay, considering he wanted to wear a dress and liked romance novel books, and not being good arround mares cemented the idea, but oh well, it may be just a coincidence, that or the aouthos didn't want to be knwon he is gey.
This was a fun read, ashamed this never got a sequel.