Sometimes creatures take extreme actions for those they love, and at times, they may come to regret those actions later on.
Twilight had steadily been recovering past the events of the invasion by the Storm King and Equestria was getting back on its hooves, but all is not well in her home and she is at a loss.
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hehe "bad dragon"...
Prolouge to serious Spike story?
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honestly no, I don't think I can do it for a longer story and is intended to just be a one-shot, but if someone wants to make a longer one with this as inspiration, they are more than welcome.
Awww, big sis comforting her little bro.
Spike, don't be ashamed of what you are, that fire maybe is a weapon, but you can use that weapon to proctect the people you love and stopping the bad people, like you did with Cozy Glow in that battle in the canterlot.
Good story.
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thanks
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thanks to you for writing this story.
A bit rough around the edges at times, but overall, this was an interesting take on an element of the movie that I honestly hadn't given that much consideration before.
All in all, kudos!
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thanks for the review
And yeah, there are some areas I just am not that great in, like dialogue and character-interaction. I can write it, but I feel like it comes out more clunky than natural.
Bullshit.
I firmly believe that if this story had been expanded into various chapters, it might've become a Featured story, if it hasn't already. Good job! Now this is an interesting idea!
So this story was alright I liked it. It does have some flaws.
I highly doubt the fire “murdered” any of the storm guards seeing as they were mostly alive last I saw them.
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really depends on how much you believe they can survive
One of them literally collapsed and was engulfed in flames and we can assume he didn't get medical attention for quite some time
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Best picture I could find and despite the speech-bubble edit, the flames are legit from the scene.
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Can’t be mad at Spike though, they were villains, it was self defense.
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Agreed, but Spike is a child and a good guy.
Rarely it is that black and white emotionally.
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He honestly can be whatever age the fan base wants, but he is a good guy.
10674365 Am I a Bad Dragon?