this whole thing is awesome...

But that ending with Fluttershy and Discord was by far the best part. I laughed so much!

Celestia and Twilight are SO going after them when they find out.

I have a certain fondness for an awkward Twilight Sparkle that comes out of her shell when she is allowed to lose herself in secret fantasies like this. Especially when enacting said fantasies leads to Mistress Sparkle who could pass for a proper dominatrix. Wonderful read.

Wholesome end scene to top things off, with its own flavor of kind too. And this line in particular.

“DISCORD, YOU SAID YOU WOULDN’T BREAK THE FOURTH WALL ON THIS DATE!”

So much said with this one line. It makes sense that by the time the Fluttercord friendship turned to romance, Fluttershy would have been thoroughly educated on all things chaos, but it's still very amusing to see Fluttershy insisting that Discord not use his powers to add any third wheels to their outing, then getting upset when he does anyway.

I don't expect this to have crossed your mind, but me being the hopelessly curious fellow I am, I can't help but wonder. Was Chaos 101 enough to fully comprehend Pinkie's Pinkie-ness, or are her own...eccentricities beyond the basics?

Hitachi Wand, bizz bazz buzz.
The sound of Celestia with overwhelming trust.
The top of a cold winter breeze.
Ejaculation as you please.
Incredible writing.
Tons of detail.
This story deserves alot more sold in retail.
8.5/10
Sexually gratifying and solidly wrote, wonder if such a thing would work in the throat?

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Did you have to make it rhyme?

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sure, why not, adds a bit of pizzazz to the whole review thing.

Can you give me the link for the cover photo of your story?

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The source link is connected to the cover image

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You might wan to double check that, as it takes me to as artist page, not the image.

To be fair, the Discord and Fluttershy tag kind of spoils that ending.

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Yeah, i meant to link to the artist. I dont want to get flagged by linking a specific NSFW image, so I decided to provide a link to the original artist.

Since Fluttershy and Discord aren't part of the story, it would be best not to tag them. It's like adding the names of the sports commentators to names of players in the current match.
It was also pretty tame. A clueless stuttering Twilight dutifully goes through a bag of items from Cadance, while Celestia relax. Twilight probably should have read some adult books before going there to be more assertive and less clueless.