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SeiryuofEast


I'm just a reader and writer?

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Jim Summers was a normal 14 years old school student, until one day when he was coming back home from school with his 8 years old little sister, Lizzie Summers, both of them got struck by a lighting.

When the siblings woke up they discovered that their bodies have change and that they where not anymore in their world, but now they where in Equestria. together they must find the way to return to their world and turn their bodies back to normal, but will the inhabitants of Equestria become their allies or enemies?


This was inspired by jsk244 story The Black Digi-Knight

The first story that I post here, I have already post the spanish version on fanfiction and now I decide to try to make the translated version here.

I said it before, but this is only for fun, I will try to make the work the most decent way I can do(of course, english is not my mother language so I will do the best I can), I will fix any mistake I do in time. having said that, enjoy it :twilightsmile:

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 54 )

Me gustó mucho el prólogo
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Ah español, gracias me alegra que te haya gustado :twilightsmile:

Don't worry partner it's hard write of Aj's accent

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Yeah, If is hard for me already in Spanish, I wouldn't dare to do it in English. :twilightsheepish:

but the habitants of Equestria would become a their allies or enemies?

Don't you mean "but will the inhabitants of Equestria become their allies or enemies?"?

Personally I would like to see Gatomon / Tailmon because Liz will keep her cute side. I remember that Gatomon posed a capacity similar to Fluttershy The look it'll be funny to see them do a duel between the two.

Darcmon ... I don't know much about her abilities so it'll be good to see her like that.

Nerfertimon: We would have to give a way to make a DigiArmor appear (as I like to appler). I don't remember if Nerfertimon showed little emotion because his resanble face has a status. So that could be a little terrifying for the ponies.

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Gatomon it could be a good choice, Liz could stay being small and continue venturing around.

Darcmon for the other hand, I really don't know much about her, I don't remember the movie much and the wiki doesn't help much either, another choice in exchange for her was Mikemon, but it will be same thing if I choose for Gatomon. :twilightsheepish:

And Nefertimon, well it could be interesting to see how the ponies reacts about her in that form, and for a reason for the armor egg to appear, well the wiki says that Salamon can evolve with or without the digimental of light, so there's no problem about it.

Lately, I had choose already the Perfect level digimon for Liz that could make the things more interesting, so in the end the choices for Adult lv will be now: Gatomon or Nefertimon, I think I could let the choice in a poll :twilightsmile:

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ok for a poll I don't see a problem for that.

I vote for Gatomon: my reason Liz could pose as a cat avoid worrying about the ponies, little moved around like she was a human and increased strength, agility and speed

Nerfertimon:looks like a sphinx and as you said it to give some pretty funny integration and reaction. added learns how to use his new wings.

continue this story it is good;)

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Sure, I just finished checking the chapters and right now chapter 3 have almost 1100 words. :twilightsmile:

New Chapter :D i liked :3 Ty for the chapter.

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I'm glad that you like it, let's see if I can up one more before the year ends :twilightsmile:

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Yeahhh :D you can do it and happy christmas

happy new year! great chapter as always!!

Happy new Year , you are te best :D i really liked this chapter.

Very nice chapter.

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The ending was funny 10000000000% golden

OOooo I like where this is heading.

I kinda wish they did stay in Canterlot first. The concept of these 2 staying there and all the terrible nobles doing things then them going to Ponyville is what I wish I saw, but I’m ok with this good chapter. Also I really think it would be a bad idea to let Joe know that Luna = NMM.

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I was thinking in that too at first, but in the end I thought to let them go at Canterlot and experience that before the last episode of season one for the event with Discord and cause Jim can't travel to Canterlot anytime he want, unless the train has a freight car for himself and yeah, is better for Jim to not know that Luna is NM yet :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the new chapter. I love him :moustache:

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Alright I think I understand.

Hey will Joe be able to de-digivolve

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That was something that I was going to do at the beginning of the story if I do it like in the black digi knight at the moment when discord got free, but the idea got too far away that the story had become it's own thing, that's why I will change the cover image :twilightsheepish:

I say both Gatomon for normal digivolves and Nefertimon for the possibility of armor digivolves.

Then Lizzie will become Tailmon (Gatomon)?

good to see you’re back!! great chapter :)

I can imagine how Fluttershy will react when Jim de-evolves.

This is a good fic. Been a while since I see a main character with common sense. Not smart, not intelligent, not quick witted, just common sense. There have been waaaay too many fics where the MC just kind of have the situation on his control and was just overpowering the MLP cast. Or them doing something wrong and then either get it resolved immediately or just dragging it out.

Liking how you give the meta knowledge to a younger secondary MC who is weak. Give us a bit of tension as Jim who is the one running the show doesn't know what to do, but Liz who does just don't have the strength to carry it out and is just too young to take advantage of it. The way you show how their actions have consequences and yet are able to be resolved with time without dragging it out for several chapter is also nice.

Keep up the good work. The way these relationship are proggressing are very believable and is enjoyable.

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I'm glad to know that you like the story, I'm feel the same. Mostly in the fics, the MC is the one that resolve the problems and for the most, in a easy way, something that can become pretty boring if the character is not interesting. Sadly I think that I will skip the time in the story and the progress in the relationships since I don't want to do a summary of every situations that had occur in the series :twilightsheepish:

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Not a problem. I quite like that in fact. Most fics while they are able to sidestep the OP MC tag cliche they instead tried to include every single episode of MLP. A time skips of a few episode per chapter I think is quite ideal as long as there isn't any major events inside.

Comment posted by HexoRequiem deleted Aug 1st, 2021

Gracias por el capitulo :D, pero ya me diste curiosidad con esos sueños de Jim ;') , sufriré las siguientes semanas tratando de pensar de que van aunque ya me tengo una idea xd. Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo de "A desired paradise" o "Digital storm".

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El siguiente sera de A desired paradise, pero lo empezare a hacer despues de que saque la nueva historia XD

Me gustó mucho el nuevo episodio 😁

Can't wait for the next chapter

Is there going to be more chapters?

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