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SeiryuofEast


I'm just a reader and writer?

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Michael, a seven year old boy, was peacefully celebrating his birthday along with his family and friends, after the party was over he suffered a strange accident, when he open his eyes, he found himself in a very bizarre situation as he discovered infront of him a huge white winged unicorn looking down to him, can he find the answers of his predicament as he live a new life in the world of Equestria?


Yeah this is another inspire story, this time with drnkntst story The Monster of Canterlot (but I don't think that this story would be as long as his story :twilightsheepish: ), this time with a crossover with digimon, to be honest there aren't many stories of digimon with this kind of theme that are active at the present time :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 28 )

Well you made Michael op by turning him into one of the seven deadly digimon. Im interested to see how this will go and if you'll have him digivolve to Ultimate then Mega

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Hehehe, well the thing is that he doesn't know anything about it, that's what made this interesting

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Agreed. If he knew while it would still be interesting it wouldn't be as interesting as him learning to use his powers.

You seem like a younger Author. Ill follow you for a while.

So far your story seems Ok, but you need to make sure your grammar is right. Not so much the "Grammar Nazi" stuff, but making sure the sentances make sense.

"He ran to the car," rather than, "He run to the car," or, "He ran to car."

That sort of thing.

Looking forward to more.

Monk
“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart

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Finally, someone who has point my grammar, to be honest I'm not perfect with my english (If I dare to say a opinion of myself, I would be like 75-80% of 100%) since is not my mother language (is the spanish by the way), I don't want my grammar to be perfect but acceptable, that's why I ask to point my mistakes(if I make one) so I can fix them and learn from them, thank you and you are welcome :twilightsmile:

:O hablas español, me ayuda a escribirte comentarios, Me encanta tu nueva escritura, soy fanático de digimon y no hay mucho para leer sobre digimon en si dentro de fimfiction. No se si te acuerdas pero también comentaba en Tormenta Digital. Tienes todo mi apoyo :D ,haces un excelente trabajo al escribir :D.

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Si hablo españolo XD

Me acuerdo de vos chavon, de verdad me ayudan bastante tus comentarios sabiendo que te gustan mis historias y si, no hay mucho que ver de digimon por aca y menos con la tematica del Tensei (Y si las hay estan muertas o tienen un hiatus eterno, como la del Black digi-knight), vere si mas a futuro saco mas con esta tematica, pero mientras no mas estaran Tormenta digital y Un paraiso deseado, muchas gracias por tu apoyo :twilightsmile:

Nice job with this chapter

Dios que hermoso de lo que me había perdido porque no me llegaba la notificación, ese es puttimon e cupimon no? Espero con ansias el siguiente capituló y la reacción de Celestina xd.

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Me alegra que te haya gustado, el proximo sera para despues del siguiente cap de Digital storm :twilightsmile:

YES! More! This so cute, I love this story. Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

Nooo, llego tarde!! Pero esta muy bueno este capitulo :D. Gracias por el capitulo, esperare con ansias el siguiente :3. (Al igual que el de Digital Storm, pero creo que me esta gustando más este, pero ambos están muy buenos :3)

so sorry for you being sick, Great chapter btw :twilightsmile:

really looking forward to more chapters soon!!! :pinkiehappy:

10981110
Me alegra que te haya gustado, he estado algo ocupado pero vere si puedo continuar con el siguiente cap de Digital storm esta semana :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, I will look for finishing the next chapter of Digital storm(it has almost 2k of words) this week before doing the chapter 4 of this story :twilightsmile:

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:D Eso estaría super bien, pero no te presiones vale? yo digo solamente :3

10989396
Jajaja, bue la verdad todavia falta y me lo ando tomando con calma, la semana ha estado atareada pero ya por 2400 palabras, todavia me faltan 2 escenas mas sin contar la que estoy haciendo, lo bueno es que se me ocurren mas cosas que agregar :twilightsheepish:

Hmmm I'm thinking that this is the digimon main villian from digimon frontier.
(I mean this digimon ,you got what I mean.
The boy turned into a digimon?)

Vas a dejar caer las historias de digimon? ya ha pasado un tiempo desde la ultima actualización y quisiera saber si seguir esperando o no esperar nada xd.

11085907
Volvere a escribir pero despues de año nuevo, este tiempo es atareado pero estoy pendiente por aqui :twilightsheepish:

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Super entonces, estaré esperando con ansias enero. Para la próxima avisa please, para no estar cada día revisando si actualizo, ahora se que no tengo que revisar por un tiempo ya no me dará una wea mental revisar cada día sin ver nada nuevo. Aprovechando te deseo una feliz navidad y un prospero año nuevo :D.

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I will be back after january first week.

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