It's Redheart, not Red Heart.

It needs more chapters my friend.

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Does that really matter?

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Well, Redheart is the character's name, and Red Heart is not, the character's name.

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woops that's my bad, damn auto correct must sneaked in.

before turning herself around and laying back don on top of Jon

Down instead of don

Jon began delving his tongue into the mare’s folds, tasting her sweet insides as her soft moans grace his ears. As Jon continues to lap at his mares velvety folds

Mare's instead of mares

coils her tong around it

Tongue instead of tong

Nice little story, keep up the good work!

Redheart was in a more happier mood,

Phrasing. more happy or happier but not more happier