The Triwizard Tournament(or not)

Canterlot High are going to England to compete against Beauxbatons, Durmstrang and Hogwarts for the Triwizard. Along the way, there are romances. Instead of the Patil twins go with Ron and Harry, RD and AJ go with them.

Chapters (7)

Prologue:to england · 18th Oct 2020 · 122 words
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chapter 1: annoucements and choosing · 18th Oct 2020 · 410 words
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Chapter 2: Task 1(Potter Stinks) · 18th Oct 2020 · 170 words
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the yule ball · 20th Oct 2020 · 330 words
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task 2: the lake · 22nd Oct 2020 · 397 words
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the maze and the battle · 22nd Oct 2020 · 831 words
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epilogue(we shine like rainbows) · 22nd Oct 2020 · 157 words
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Silent Wing

Silent Wing #1 · Oct 22nd, 2020 · 4 · · epilogue(we shine like rainbows) ·

While the concept behind this sounds intresting, I am unsure if I would count it as a story at all, with an average wordcount of only 350 words per chapter. It sounds extremly rushed and I think you could have made much more out of it. So sorry for it, but I have to downvote this.

GRYFFINDOR123456

GRYFFINDOR123456 #2 · Oct 23rd, 2020 · · · epilogue(we shine like rainbows) ·

I was actually planning on writing a better version of this on Fanfiction.net.
I normally would copy and paste the story onto here(kind of) and add a couple more stuff in.
I might add the Quidditch world cup, but that’s down to the readers.
I just wanted to put in a question of what ifs?
And answers.

proudtobeabrony667

proudtobeabrony667 #3 · Oct 25th, 2020 · · · epilogue(we shine like rainbows) ·

I appreciate the setup ti this story, however if I am to add any constructive criticisms it seemed too fast paced for me, I still like the story itself but my only wish is that it was more filled out in some areas

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