This story is a sequel to Magical Mysteries of Hogwarts
After wonderful summer, Twilight's second year at Hogwarts arrives. She and her friends still need to find the rest of crystals. But what happens when a certain someone goes to the dark side?
SunLight, AppleDash
I need to know what happens and great series by the way
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Thank you, glad you like it! And I'll be posting next chapter very soon
Never thought Twilight would be up for dangerous tricks
thoroughly enjoyed it!
Are you thinking of writing more?
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Who knows what happened to make her like that. Stay tuned to find out explanationπ
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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for commenting and yes, I do plan to write a lot more, I like writing this storyπ
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Youβre welcome(Giggle) and I am(as I said yesterday) looking forward to it!!!!
I forgot small details from the first story. How long does she says that's been going on 6 years? So he was trying to befriend an 11 years old girl from his point of view (at that time) while he was 10? And then later it grew into one sided romantic relationship. None of this is even remotely believable.
Maybe, because, going with stereotypes.
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I don't really understand your point of view. Why is it not believable?
They are almost the same age so it's normal one could develop a crush on the other or try to be friends (like 1-2 years older or younger is all around the same age and completly normal).
And sadly there are some creepy men who don't want to let you alone even after you rejected them and don't take the hint. Sadly it would make sense that he has been crushing on her for years and trying to get with her even if she said no. I tried to point out how wrong and digusting (and even creepy) it is to try to force someone to be with you even after they said no multiple times. Making it last this long makes the creepy and wrong part pointed out even more
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Well I am a girl who likes girls and tbh if you aren't comfortable to be completly out yet but want to somehow hint to someone you like girls, the best way to go is wear rainbow stuff (or like say stuff that are in LGBT community hints and codes for sexualities). Rainbow Dash usually wears rainbow stuff so one can easily assume she is into girls (yes, that's a stereotype but I know that I get happy when I meet a girl wearing rainbow skjsksjs) and even I try to hint by for example drawing some rainbow clothes etc. It's a bit more subtle way to hint to other people who are LGBT or supportive that you are LGBT and to have an excuse if a homophobe approaches to say you just wear it because you like it. Of course straight people wear rainbow too but it is most often wore by LGBT people.
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1.Maybe it's just me but I can't help it to think that Rainbow Dash is some kind of misandrist who sees other guys as toxic because she 'hates' Fluttershy's brother specifically. And from my point of view girls who display hostility for whatever reason aren't even worth a bother. What I mean is for a guy this hostility could become equally annoying and he could just decide to distance himself from that girl as far away as possible.
2. I have to suspect that a lot of things was just happening in Rainbow Dash's head and other people aren't mind readers and they can't guess someone sexuality because they wear certain things.
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1. True, that would be logical and normal behaviour. Sadly not everyone does that and some people really push too far.... thinking of MLP and him not quitting I made it be like that here too
2. Yes true, clothes don't say anything. I guess sometimes people just try to hint they are certain sexuality in convos too and expect people to know etc. But no one can know for sure unless someone tells them, so yes it was mostly in her head
Finally got to the source material that this fanfic, I guess, makes crossover with. Not really sure how the MC manages schoolwork, hobies, her friends, her rival. And on top of that she supposed to care about her missing brother.
Should of guessed zephyr would make a debut sooner than later.
You've got to be kidding me!
Should of kept that mouth of your shut dash! π
Uh oh! π°
It must be the crystal that's causing this!! π°
Well there goes our chances of finding out who rarity was dating. Also I'm very sorry rarity.
Seriously, rarity having a crush on applejack! I doubt that's true. I think trixie made it up.
Yeah, I think twilight just did it to make you upset fluttershy. π
Maybe because he was distracted or just wasn't paying attention.
Ngl, I'm not sure if I should be happy or sad about it. π
Great now we got another problem on our hands. First twilight's attitude change, then we found out rarity might have a crush on applejack and now Mel thinks fluttershy has feelings for discord! What's next rainbow and applejack becoming rivals!?!?!?
The crystal must be trying to take control of her! π°
Here we go again.
If snape found out they were there, they'd be in serious trouble!
Good save there sunset, if twilight kept going at it you'd all be in some serious hot water by now.
Yep, this is serious alright. We definitely have to find out how to fix this before it gets worse.
He's probably depressed or sad over what rainbow told him.
Yeah, discord has a very good point there Mel. Get a grip on yourself! π
Yeah, something must be up and I don't like it 1 bit.
Why is my gut telling me it's twilight!!! π°
Noooooo!!!!!
Yeah, something tells me it might just be one. π°
Just had to be at the moment she was helping them out with your crystal search!
Damn, I'm so sorry pinkie.
Yep, and that hopefully not another one of them gets infected as well. π€
Oh come one! Are you serious! Plus I think the thing in question was the diary sunset found and that maybe twilight or Stacy were the ones who broke them out but I'm gonna take it with a grain of salt for now.
Hopefully this works. π€
God da,n it why did I have really jinx it.
Damn, this sure is getting worse than I thought. π°
Guess that explains what sunset thought was off about the place. π°
You'd be surprised what is it and that it'll just lead to a disaster.
He probably knows what they were hiding from him and I have a feeling he's gonna follow them for sure.
Called it!
Oh boy, I got a bad feeling about this. π¬
More like screwed if you ask me. π
Sadly it isn't sunset. π¬
Hopefully π€
There goes her plan.
You'll be in for a surprise why she has in rainbow, but it doesn't involve you.
And there goes another relationship over. Man I feel bad for the girls with everything that's been happening to them since the second school year started.
Guess we'll have to wait and see how they'll respond to it.
She's right, it really isn't.
Yep, it really helps.
Thank you sunset, this sure will help you, I just know it. Especially after breaking up with twilight. :
I still think she should split it out.
Not surprised there. π
everything was going so well and now it's been thrown down the drain!
I think you might be right pinkie and I have a good feeling who it might be. π
I take back what I said just now about you pinkie. π
Yep, exactly!
So she does have feelings for discord!
She should of told them she found it instead of stowing it in her pocket.
Same.
I think it's obvious now fluttershy is gonna confess her feeling to discord sooner than later.
Are you kidding me!!! Why there of all places!?!?!?!
Well, looks like they found 2 crystals instead of 1. I hope rainbow doesn't make the same mistake applejack did but something tells me she already has. π
Well that was smart thinking.
Looks like their punishment will be worse for sure this time.
I take back everything I said about you discord. And about blaming twilight for it.
Welp, they're screwed now.
I don't.
Ngl, I think we should of been prepared for this moment all along.
I don't buy it, it could be just a false rumor twilight decided to share due to the way she's gene acting since she found that crystal. π
That quick, are you kidding me!?!?!?
God damn it pinkie.
It's obvious discord will contact you for sure fluttershy without a doubt for sure.
Well, guess it's time to leave the work to the professors to find the other crystals that are still out there. But still I hope the girls manage to solve the other problems at hand, such as get Twilight & Rarity back to their normal selves, get those crystals applejack and rainbow have away from them and destroyed, and lastly find trixie and make her give up whatever plan she has!
It's pretty obvious who the letter is from. π
Oh no! Pinkie!!!! π°
It seems like twilight is trying to stop whatever magic is trying to take over her! π±
I still think your guilty of at least something such as breaking and entering. π‘
Still, it's too dangerous and you heard what dumbledore said if they went out to try and find them.
Yep, pinkie is now been consumed by whatever dark magic that is probably the same kind as what infected twilight and rarity.
Let's hope it works. π€
You aren't, it's whatever that magic is doing to your mind! π
Wait, Mel did it! And she's the one behind these spells taking over the girls!??!! Oh that bastard is gonna pay!
Now is probably the time to stop this madness before it gets worse fluttershy. π°
Well, looks like they won't have to go far to find that last crystal. But getting it away from Mel is sure gonna be a hard one.
Something tells me she might have back up and it might be who I think it is.
Great, now sunset has broken the fourth wall.
Ok, now how would she know that?!?!?!
Yep, without a doubt she would.
Get ready trixie as there's no going back now.
Something tells me that if they did that they'd stab them in the back with another plan of theirs. π
Good timing!
Not good! π°
You and me both. And I can't believe for once I agreed with her.
Not to mention having all of you girls back to normal and on our side.
She probably did without a doubt.
Well I'm glad fluttershy finally confessed her feelings for discord, but didn't expect her to curse before saying it.
That's good to know. π
Enjoy your time in azkaban Mel.
Well, it's good to see my favorite ship back together.
We probably will see something else from her in the future, without a doubt. π
Good thinking. Nothing can stand in our way with the mane 7 ad their magical crystals!!!
Best to save it for the summer discord. Or early fall maybe.
Your probably gonna be in for another one next year fluttershy.
There we go again.
They sure will.
Ngl this story was just as good as the first one but still has some mistakes that need to be dealt with. Sure hope to see more of these in the future.
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Thank you so much for the feedback, I should definitely one day read again through the story to fix some errors but I am glad you liked the story and that the second part was as good as the first one. And thank you for comments, it was very fun to read them!
There will be a continuation, I have been planning the plot of it lately and already written the first chapter.
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good and can't wait to see the next one